tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post6098205600271546022..comments2023-09-27T17:48:03.319+05:30Comments on Unravelling Facades..: Have to move on..Alcinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-5952520492425460432010-11-07T06:59:53.583+05:302010-11-07T06:59:53.583+05:30No problem at all :)) Was just a suggestion.and yo...No problem at all :)) Was just a suggestion.and your decision was right and practical :)But should not leave blank..let it be.P-Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12083502311197419702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-71975988443527459562010-11-06T22:53:16.886+05:302010-11-06T22:53:16.886+05:30Have considered what you said but not exactly..I a...Have considered what you said but not exactly..I also thought the same that it wouldn't work out but I am still confused..Think should leave it blank :P<br /><br />Well will <i>not approve</i> that comment though :)..hope you wont mind it<br /><br />And i agree to what you said and I welcome you for the postmortem :)Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-54868735648971913892010-11-06T18:00:55.562+05:302010-11-06T18:00:55.562+05:30Yeah may be.. :P
They might be searching blog pos...Yeah may be.. :P<br /><br />They might be searching blog post with the name of their place :P<br /><br />You are the one who finds the sweetness :D ..I just included them to make it a bit realistic..Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-38517055049716940552010-11-06T17:56:04.198+05:302010-11-06T17:56:04.198+05:30May be because of the mention of Israel, Alcina ha...May be because of the mention of Israel, Alcina hahahahaha. Actually the words you used in this novel, widely used in Urdu too :) Specially "She looked at him through the corner of her eyes and said "Musaamah"(forgiven). He hugged her and bade her ma salaama(goodbye)" the inclusion of words is really sweet :)P-Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12083502311197419702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-49615156202497097262010-11-06T15:20:19.044+05:302010-11-06T15:20:19.044+05:30You know it seems this post has gathered a bit att...You know it seems this post has gathered a bit attention from the people living in Arab as i see from the flag counter :PAlcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-68240765616901493502010-11-06T15:14:43.023+05:302010-11-06T15:14:43.023+05:30Hmmm..waiting eagerly :DHmmm..waiting eagerly :DAlcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-20277818009319405422010-11-06T12:57:33.317+05:302010-11-06T12:57:33.317+05:30:) Yeah. It is wise not get adament on our views t...:) Yeah. It is wise not get adament on our views that it must be right :)) I am going to include that conversation in one of my coming stories :))P-Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12083502311197419702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-56342566205961450192010-11-06T10:45:52.697+05:302010-11-06T10:45:52.697+05:30Thank you again for that appreciation of yours :)Thank you again for that appreciation of yours :)Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-86890330264421534802010-11-06T10:44:54.950+05:302010-11-06T10:44:54.950+05:30Hahahaha.. Nice solution that you were provided wi...Hahahaha.. Nice solution that you were provided with.<br /><br />Everyone has a different viewpoint so as per you ..you were correct in what you said and your editor was right on what he said.<br />It's how people accept or criticize the view you are putting and how you want the readers thought process to be reacting to your posts rather your hidden feeling inside the posts.Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-77504900443108044432010-11-06T10:40:14.302+05:302010-11-06T10:40:14.302+05:30Also appreciating to select a unique back ground f...Also appreciating to select a unique back ground for the novel :)P-Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12083502311197419702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-52598947343607365272010-11-06T10:36:24.086+05:302010-11-06T10:36:24.086+05:30:))) Well you succeed to confuse me in first para ...:))) Well you succeed to confuse me in first para hahahaha. You are right. Its foolishness to expect 100% perfection. The only thing is we can try our best every time :) <br /><br />You know in one of my story MOAN, my editor asked me to conclude the ending..ki what will happen this and that. I said see we cant conclude & describe many things in life. Because almost everything do not have a P-Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12083502311197419702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-7431376749081056372010-11-06T10:23:08.676+05:302010-11-06T10:23:08.676+05:30Well,well i don't mind lengthy discussions :)....Well,well i don't mind lengthy discussions :)..those are always welcome. Here in would like to quote one more thing that may be we can improve step by step from first level to any as and how you have decided but we can never reach the last level as then we would become perfect and then there would be no scope left for achieving the next from where we get the zest of living the actual fun and Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-40298165820921122332010-11-05T23:50:40.188+05:302010-11-05T23:50:40.188+05:30Exactly Alcina. Practice makes us perfect :D It ma...Exactly Alcina. Practice makes us perfect :D It may spark a very lengthy discussion between us. Hence want to conclude that we can express our feeling through few words than many sentences. I think thats the art of writing :) Ok..tell me one thing, why did you chose israel as storey's back ground ?P-Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12083502311197419702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-56152942977250327832010-11-05T13:29:30.096+05:302010-11-05T13:29:30.096+05:30Thank you so much for taking out time for reading ...Thank you so much for taking out time for reading such a big story and appreciating it in a very unusual and pretty fashion :P..<br /><br />Shall improve post by post ;)..<br /><br />Thanks for the wishes..Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1552094632620369558.post-36952302523705151222010-11-05T12:54:10.069+05:302010-11-05T12:54:10.069+05:30Very good love story with a sad ending. You can im...Very good love story with a sad ending. You can improve this story again. Very good creative work. :) The Arabic words u given among lines are giving realistic touch and the feel of cultural back ground. Good work..improve it too.:) My best wishes.P-Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12083502311197419702noreply@blogger.com