"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Saturday, February 18, 2012

55 Fiction:Answer!

He smiled looking at her to make her do the same.
She clutched the bed sheet tightly between those sharp nails.
He asked her Do you love me and will stay this way with me forever?
Looking away she said i don't know and a tear trickled down her face.

9 comments:

Simran said...

Awww..Such a heart breaking...

But I loved the way you crafted it!

the other side of me said...

sad story but beautifully written :)

the other side of me said...

..and yeah wait for mail..its coming ur way soon ;)

Raniyal Niyada said...

sometimes, we can fall in love with some one so deeply, but that doesn't mean we are destined to spend our lives together...

Sometimes we just have to take what we get and be satisfied with tat...

take care love
niya

ANJALI.N.KUMAR said...

heyy back after a long gap... glad to see ur blog with a beautiful theme... and yaa ur posts as beautiful as always... loved it yaar tc... keep smiling :)
http://timetoseedreamzz.blogspot.in

anjali

Cяystal said...

Sometimes your heart can break with the littlest of words uttered.
Hmph. This was good :)

Aditi Ray said...

Loved the way u play with ur words...!
Beautifully written!!

Enigmatic Soul said...

This is charged with emotion and makes you think about the possible causes and consequences, not to mention the guy's intentions as well. Brilliant work.

Mak said...

Alcina, i can only say wow after reading this post.

You have a beautiful blog. Very interesting. I am sure i will be a regular visitor here. Thank you.