Unravelling Facades..: Voice lost

Monday, August 06, 2012

Voice lost

at 11:23:00 AM

I tried as much as i could,

and now there is no more.

I failed to have you.

I got rejected.

And I stand here today

stranded and alone

with my voice lost..

8 comments:

Amrit Sinha said...: Dark and intense words !!!; August 6, 2012 at 3:34 PM
Mak said...: It is time to let go Tripta.; August 7, 2012 at 11:06 PM
Alcina said...: @Green speck
I am amazed you could detect something dark..
Thank you.; August 8, 2012 at 11:34 AM
Alcina said...: @Mak
Easier said than done!
But its just not about one thing..its about all the small small things...; August 8, 2012 at 11:35 AM
sneha said...: deep..; August 9, 2012 at 10:29 AM
ANJALI.N.KUMAR said...: emotional.... felt an intensity of saddness in those lines...; August 11, 2012 at 3:00 PM
Vaisakhi said...: rejection has no right to pull u down dear....n silence is more powerful than we give it credit for...voice lost can find strength in silence if u try to hear it...:)...nice write...; August 12, 2012 at 12:24 AM
Kavita(kavya) said...: some time I feel same
Rejected and failed,
touchy one..; August 12, 2012 at 12:03 PM

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