"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Monday, April 15, 2013

Lost identity

They told her to trust them,she did.
They said they'll be there when the times are grey,she believed.
They told her they were saying the truth to her,she strived.
But a time came and she was standing there in the cold,
the rain was pouring so heavy and ruthless.
She looked back to find the trusted one but there was no one.
Silence emblazoned all around.
She wept till the tears ran dry.
No one held her in their arms.
No one cared for her but themselves.
No one caressed her and assured time ahead will be kind.
They had lied straight to her face and she lay there crumpling alone.
Scattering with every drop that hit her.
Breathing was laborious,but she breathed till
She wasn't what she was anymore!


~✯*Jela*✯~ said...

seems like your having a bad time. Move forward. It will pass ;-)

The Purple Assassin. said...

Beautiful piece of work.
You have captured it magnificently.

Mark Noce said...

Intriguing poem. Great artwork:)

Nick Wilford said...

That was quite a chilling read. Very striking poem.

Enigmatic Soul said...

The pain and despair is very evident here. It is like a haunting realm of loneliness where one's self is crumbing and crumbling and crumbling... But the question is, what are we transformed into, in the end?

Well penned. Keep it up.

Alcina said...

Not a poem that is based on me :)
A passing thought masked in poem.

Alcina said...

@The purple Assassin
Thank you dear.

Alcina said...

@mark Noce
Hmm..intriguing.. that is interesting to know.

Hope you had a happy visit!!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@Nick Wilford
Thank you :)

Hope you had a happy visit!!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@Enigmatic Soul
The answer to your question remains a mystery.But when come to think of it,the outcome is so much dependent on surrounding and perception.

Well thank you :)

Green Speck said...

This is soulful and heart-touching !!!