"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Tuesday, September 28, 2010

In need of ME..!!




Ripped Apart
Splashed blood all around,
Still dropping some in the silent vicinity.
Oh!! did you hear that--
Or did you missed that collapsing beat.
Like the wind chime of which sound dies out,
Heart setting its end fleet.
Like the boat nearing the unknown waterfall,
Moving on with full of zeal.
And the Horizon trying to meet Zenith.
That was my other half,
That was my soul that’s now torn apart.
It’s all imagined it is not like the lively beings.
Shadows mocking at M/e
My own separated from M/e


They grab me in this opportunity.
The half is there I know,
It’s just besides I know to console.
But today it screams,
It’s in pain indeed,
My other half is in need of ME . . !!







19 comments:

Naysa said...

painful n emotional

om said...

lovely.... i love these lines ........ :)

priyanka said...

sexy baby...... its awsome!!!:D

mystic.payel said...

Ooooo... MMMMM... GGGGG..........
Alcina u plz send me one of ur autographs... i dont wantto miss this chance to get a personal touch of a future legend
how can u do that yaar.....
that was MIND BLOWINGGGGGG....
i dont have the brain and heart to judge it.. how good that is.. am a novice.. sorry.. but with all that ostrich brain i have .. i can only say that.. u are going to rock it someday.. big time..
Wishes.. :) God Bless.. and treat us with such sweets all throughout.. :)

Alcina said...

@naysa..Watch the realisation :)

Alcina said...

@Om..
Thank you for the love.. :)

Alcina said...

@priyanka ;)

Alcina said...

@payel..
I am highly honoured..Fell from my chair :P

Thanks for your genorosity .. :)

Makk said...

well, composingly rippening..!


Keep it up!

Alcina said...

@Makk

:) . .

Will surely let it be so.. :)

Mack said...

That's a quite fresh perspective... "my other half is in need of me"

Nice :)

Alcina said...

Thanx Mack.. :) ..perspective is yours though of seeing what i wrote :)

Rup said...

wooooaa.. awesome.. marvelous.. i dont know what to say... any adjective i write here seems less..

seriously... one of the best that i read here...

keep writing boss!
Cheers!

Alcina said...

@Rup
I am honored man by those words :D
Thanks a lot..


I'll keep writing but you should also keep chiming here ;)

Rup said...

:)

dont worry abt me chiming... cos when i came across this... "reigning wanderer" already went to the right of my blog :)

but yeah... this one is really awesome...i keep reading it again and again :) :)

ok ok.... i better get off my lappy and leave my bed for univ.. will catch up later!

ciao!
have fun!

Alcina said...

@Rup
Oh this post is gonna get lot of attention ;)

Sure hurry on..cya :)

Ninu said...

hey nice lines.... :) filled with emotions...mmm

i thot the pics i use in my blog is better than any other pic... hehe...

but u use good pics too... :)

whr do u get it??

Alcina said...

@Ninu
Everyone should have believe in whatever they do and thats what you do when you say you thought that the pics you use are better than any other pic..

Search and search till you stumble upon what you like :)..thats what i do

Reicha Ahluwalia said...

Its a little painful though but beautifully expressed !!
You have a great control over words. I like the way you play with them in poems :)