"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Monday, November 07, 2011

In need of ME..!!(2)

It's a part two to one of my very old poem.. > In need of ME..!! 

Wavering in the wind,

teasing thyself.
Once again Ripping m/e
The game that was on, 
of shadows and stares.
Present one moment,
bygone the other right there.
Curling the words in mouth,
it couldn't produce to m/e.
Me consoled and caressed m/e.
M/e seemed numb and dead.

Me wouldn't give up till m/resurrects,

through the ghastly whirlpool and currents.
Bloody battling of piercing words.
Loathed atmosphere that remained in past,
once again lingers upright and erect.
The growling need haunts again,
and me promise this time,
me shall put it to end.
The pain of m/e me engulf.
M/let mocking shadows burn me to ashes.
Me ceases m/e screaming.
Shadow's hunger and passion sufficed.
My separated m/e joined again.
Me mingles to the healed M/e..!!


16 comments:

Cяystal said...

I think its the beautiful, broken me moments that are so astoundingly well-crafted!
Loved every bit .. and sorry, haven't been around due to my insane net !

Lilangel said...

Loved the last line and the poem ofcourse :)

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Lovely poem..but the pic is scary :/

Reicha Ahluwalia said...

Life is beautiful, its just we don't step out of the dark side.
I love thy ending which shows the light after the long darkness of separability...
Very well created.
Nice.
*Apologies*- Wondering how i missed your post...Thanks for the link again

Alcina said...

@Crystal
My pleasure that u liked it :)

It's ok insanity is what keeps one alive! ;)

Alcina said...

@Lilangel
Thank u girly! :)

Alcina said...

@Valli
Sorry for the inconvenience :P didn't get anything less scary to suit it.
Thank you!

Alcina said...

@Reicha Ahluwalia
Thank you :) ..and you got it babes!

It's ok no apologies needed..you read it at last and that what matters in the end i suppose.

beccagivens said...

So often - if we would just get out of our own way there would be enough room for growth and healing!!

Daydreamertoo said...

Healing ourselves from the pain of love by forgiving someone or ourselves, is the most important thing we can do, it's the only thing that allows us to move on.
This is sad but the person seems to have reached the point of knowing it's time to let go and more ahead.
Painful imagery. A lovely write.

mairmusic said...

Love your image!

Old Raven said...

Shadow work.

The Orange Tree said...

haunting.
well done,

Happy Rally.

Heaven said...

a nice self reflection ...i think we are a complicated soul of "me" ~

tasithoughts said...

Really captures everything in real perspective.

JP

http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/12/07/wisping-snow/

nefariousx said...

I like what you did with the divide m/e, i thought it worked well. I liked your poem especially the last line.