Shriveling with every breathe.
Shivering with every step.
Ramifications unfold my prophecies.
Its hard now to feel the self palpitating.
It grieves me to see,
the life shrinking in them.
It hurts i say so,
but all falls on deaf ears;
and parched heart which i was trying to resuscitate.
Couldn't they feel me holding?
Couldn't they see me struggling for them?
Couldn't they see i was drinking their pain?
Couldn't they see my claret burning?
I abandoned my trust on them.
I am silenced through and through.
And now they say i am unfair.
They will blame me,
but can't they see
that they sabotaged themselves!
14 comments:
Its strange but true. Right now, just a few seconds ago, I clicked on your link to see where are you, and if you have updated or not. Then I come back and see in my blog dashboard the update of your new post.Its a coincidence.
Anyway, Alcina, tell me how are you. Is everything Ok ? Talk to me if you want to.
take care,
Nice post..lovely verses...
that was one heck of a writing Alcina .. Kudos! :)
Lovely poem !!!
awesome.... a play of emotions... grt yaar... & yaa remeber whenevr we are in pain der is an opposite waiting for us... u can surely see the sunshine :)keep smiling..
you have written it in your style... First Person ...stating directly..
I rather more used third person... :)
but nevertheless quiet hitting bulls eyes..
It always feels nice to read your comment
As always :)
I have done the needful for us to be able to talk.
And actually everything is not ok.
Your presence here after a longtime.
Thank you!
Simply honoured with your words :)
Thank you
True dear.
Thank you :)
Of course there ought to be some difference.
Well quiet hitting that too seeing from you is quiet an achievement in itself.
Touched deep within Tripta. Drinking pain for them was not worth.
@Mak
Well it seems it wasn't worth but maybe for that moment it was worth it..things and people change too soon with time..
I am glad it touched you!
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