The wind was ferocious,
uncovering her layer by layer.
Speaking of a ominous storm.
Laying there on the couch;
Her eyes were wide open staring nowhere.
They spoke of pain and love,
both together to her surprise.
The glazing stiletto had her reflection,
the night carried;
Blackened silhouette of her.
She knew of no one that she could talk to.
The lines were engaged of her life screwed.
She had a wish to live for someone,
but now it seemed a impenetrable thought.
She was close to death and near to Satan;
Satan loved her beauty and admired it,
For that resuscitating he revived her life.
She was mesmerized taken by surprise.
Darkness became hers for lifetime.
9 comments:
Just a doubt...why is she still in darkness?
what happened to kiss of life... I know you have striked the line...but just curious
mesmerizing!!! :)
@Beyond horizon
Coz it was kiss by Satan :)
Thanks..!!
Oh... I got that...
Thanks :)
Dark and mysterious. The character reminded me of Miss Havisham from the book Great Expectations by Charles Dickens.
Nice imagination snehu...
You described it so nicely that I can feel the lonliness and dark life of her!
but does Satan give life he loves somebody, I thought he'd escort her to his place in hell. :P
@Sourav
So it is :)
Hmm..bringing back memories :)
@Simran
Glad that you sensationalize it :)
Thank you..!!
@Blasphemous Aesthete
Let some experienced persona comment on this :D :P
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