A dash of smile,
a hint of cheesiness.
Through eyes they were talking aloud.
The lips turned to a no,
the other side said yes.
A pounce like the tiger;
the prey is caught and in danger.
A faint smile trying to rise up on her.
He is roaring and baring his teeth.
Colliding breaths with utmost precision,
lower on the neck she can feel the fangs,
touching her soul,
making her skin shiver.
Ecstatic she clings to him tight.
He moves his face back to where,
the colliding breaths started playing.
The soft feather touch,
of each others lips,
eyes tight shut.
It was the most subtle one,
of delicate placement.
She could feel the gravity no more.
on the back the teasing caress.
passions exploded into each other,
like a eruption of lava from volcano.
She stopped shivering.
He was sucking her all through her breath.
Her soul was being possessed by him.
He reigned her forever.
6 comments:
So much for a moment so ephemeral. Splendid. :)
And here I am in doubt whether to, or not to write the lines that follow, as always they do, but because the comment is just one line, that I feel its unjust of me to pay more salutations than admirations. :P
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
How close can you come , towards expressing the human feelings in words ? I believe the answer is the post above.
Sensational is the only word to describe this.
All the best for BlogJunta
What a delight can be agony!
Her soul devoured, summons exaltation-
She sways, then rests blissfully to the euphony;
While he rises in the air with euphoria, defying floatation.
@Blasphemous Aesthete
:P
The one line would have done the same wonders as the words added afterwards :)
@MAVERICK
Thank you so much..those were indeed encouraging words.
@Sayak
Awesome way of describing your feelings towards the post.
Hope you had a happy visit
Thanks for the chime!!
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