Unravelling Facades..: I love you..

Saturday, January 08, 2011

I love you..

at 7:13:00 PM

That pink smile.

That sweet scent.

A crafty laugh.

A proposal by her,

a acceptance by him.

Drifting away in smoke,

of love and beyond.

Two souls united.

Here lay the two hearts,

murmuring to each other softly.

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14 comments:

Sourav said...: Seems love is all around. Lovely! :); January 8, 2011 at 8:16 PM
Blasphemous Aesthete said...: If I lay here
If I just lay here
Would you lie with me
And just forget the world?

I don't know where
Confused about how as well
Just know that these things
Will never change for us at all

:)
Nice

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete; January 8, 2011 at 9:36 PM
Simran said...: Very sweet and romantic post..
and pic you added in it makes it more beautiful!

Keep Smiling!!
:-); January 8, 2011 at 11:01 PM
Beyond Horizon said...: I hope that equation always remains true...
:); January 9, 2011 at 12:32 AM
Deepika said...: reminded me of the song 'chasing cars" by snow patrol... amazing..:); January 11, 2011 at 3:40 PM
Makk said...: I am being drenched...; January 12, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Alcina said...: @Deepika

Thank you :); January 15, 2011 at 11:17 AM
Alcina said...: @Makk

Let it be forever and ever..; January 15, 2011 at 11:17 AM
Rupesh Agarwal said...: Ok, so finally i happen to stumble upon something positive.. light.. colourful, romantic... and not blue and dark... phew... i was about to..... anyways...

its pretty nice.. short.. and simple.. yet effectively written... nice work! :)

Cheers!; March 8, 2011 at 2:05 AM
Alcina said...: @Rup
Hehehehe....are you afraid of the darkness?

Happy that you could find the contrasting effect on my blog in time ;)
Effect is that matters..and i am glad to create that to you :); March 8, 2011 at 9:16 AM
Rupesh Agarwal said...: Hey, No.. not afraid of the darkness... but i am bored of it ;) and i feel the more we talk abt it... the more we fall into it.. its and abyss.. so... rather be happy! :); March 8, 2011 at 11:09 AM
Phewww said...: u r so into love huh????
:P

poem is nice...and as usual..picture is good too... :) al the pics u used in ur blog.. :D; April 5, 2011 at 5:26 PM
Alcina said...: @Ninu
Hmmm..let's wait and watch for hundred post completion and then you may witness the truth of love or not love.. * SUSPENSE* :P

Thank you...you always appreciate them till the core :); April 6, 2011 at 3:13 PM
GvSparx - Inspiring Lives said...: Pure, raw love...
The picture just goes perfectly along...; November 21, 2011 at 11:56 PM

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