"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Thursday, September 22, 2011

Connection..

This Entry is submitted by me for Thursday Poets Rally 52


She softly mumbled near his ears.
He was departing and couldn't hear.
He was in a surge for somewhere urgent.
Her eyes coruscated and a tear exuded.

Conceiving about him.
The day ran in haphazard.
Intermixing,remixing and varying.
Her eyes coruscated and a tear exuded.

Conceiving about her.
The day expected just urgency.
Working,managing and balancing.
His lips turned to a beguiling smile.

The sun scorched,
and their day commenced in delusion.
The moonlight proliferated,
and their reality induced.

Miles apart from each other,
the longing has always been such.
Heightening and dropping frequencies,
once he sighed other she sighed.

He came all the way,
his urgency are over now.
The day expects nothing from him,
as she knows as of now.

Coming closer he heard what she whispers;
"Take care my love and smile always"
He smiled and embraced her,
as she knows as of now.

12 comments:

Niya said...

wow alcina tat was so heart touching sweet heart :) loved it

*hugs and kisses*

Teresa Marie said...

The conveying of emotions here is excellent! Well done. Blessings, Terri

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

A happy ending. Distances won't matter, if the two lovers unite in the end.
Lovely read.


Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Marbles in My Pocket said...

A nice poem about the anxieties of separation and the knowledge of being loved.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/

Ann LeFlore said...

So lovely and so sweet how she whispered to him and he embarrassed her in the end as she knew it.
http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/09/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week_21.html

fiveloaf said...

your poem are full of encounters of the love kind and that is wonderful.. my thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/human-race-human-waste/

antomaniax said...

Beautifully crafted poem.Keep up the good work!

The Orange Tree said...

good for her,

lovely cheers, thanks for sharing.

nefariousx said...

Nice work.

The use of language creates a sense of urgency and movement.
Good use of repetition and alliteration.
I like the closing line especially.
I enjoyed it.

Lu Ann said...

This is so sweet!
I thought about my beloved one, when he´s so busy and still Im certain he thinks of me and when we´re together he feels at home :)

Thanks for sharing!

Happy Rally

saya said...

Lovely way of expressing the love between two hearts.. And a very amazing ending which says hearts always unite no matter how far the distance is :)
http://sandhyaguptamp.blogspot.com/2011/09/hallucination-2.html

magdalenahermanstories said...

Love the narration! Very seductive ;)