"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Friday, September 23, 2011

Lost chance!

You don't seem to reply.
I wished it to bespoken by you.
What if they were in my dream,
that i portrayed that big hall, 
a extravagance gather.
We danced to the tunes,
and cheered with the talks.
I ask you a question, 
you raise your eyes and stop.
You ought to answer me, 
at least when i ask you once in reality.
But you loose your chance,
and left me wondering. 
For 'yes' or 'no' which was for me,
on my way wandering.
I cry and submerge. 
I walk down the last aisle of pain.
Get myself a shot to restart,
smoking air I leave my past in ashes.
Lungs filled up it really doesn't matter.
Dropping last bit of emotions,
i will leave you my trail.
When you find me, 
you shall only regret.
If only i were alive, 
that you could have said.



11 comments:

Ovais said...

You write really well!
Even better than I do..

But this one is so sad :(

mihirvatsa said...

Very poignant. Though I guess there is some kind of tense confusion is the word 'loose' and 'left' thereafter. Otherwise, quite nice.

The Guy In The Mirror said...

Emotions put into words beautifully

Stay Blessed ^_^

lonelyrecluse said...

Really powerful read this, really enjoyed it.
Just a notification I’ve nominated you for the liebster blog award, go to http://lonelyrecluse.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/liebster-blog-award/ to claim it.
The Lonely Recluse.

Niya said...

Beautiful :)

Alcina said...

@Ovais
Never mind everyone has his or her own talent and by saying those words to me you give me such an honor..thank you :)
Life is bit of sad and happy so i portrayed just one for now i suppose

Alcina said...

@mihirvatsa
Thank you :)
Will check what you are pointing at..soon!

Alcina said...

@The Guy In The Mirror
Thank you so much shashank :)

Alcina said...

@lonelyrecluse
Aww..thats so nice of you :) :)
Thanks a ton..will claim in my 100th post to be out soon :)..

Alcina said...

@Niya
as you watch and percieve
thank you :)

Soni said...

Loved it!