"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Thursday, September 01, 2011

Whole


Trembling hands grabbing the air.

Dwindling liquid drops, 
fall on paper the ink smears.
With the subtle beats of heart,
she wanted to wipe away the carvings,
of feelings unknown and yearns.
But she forgot; 
she could not even touch her heart.
That it was not hers but of his now.
To feel the emollient touch of his hands,
on her surrendered heart. 
And the soul stands,
for the unification and blend.
Through the dark alleys,
and bottomless abyss,
they fell through and through,
in their unusual love tale.
Passions flooded their being,
hands intertwined,flesh mingled,
thirst and hunger engulfed.
Proliferated through each pore,
a joyous newness of joining, 
of two souls to one whole.

16 comments:

blackswanpoetry said...

Nice....

vaisakhi said...

beautiful n sensuous write....loved it...:)

Saru Singhal said...

Some poems make me wonder the genius behind it, your poem is one of those. I wish I can pen something like this. Lovely.

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Love in dark ways, I think I see this as a characteristic of this blog.

Nice post again :)

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Beyond Horizon said...

Feelings of Pain to sensuous!

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi
tha timg is so perfectly suited for the post...n a beautiful post too..
:)
nice...started on a different note, n ended on another. :)


Regards,
Eon...

Alcina said...

@blackswanpoetry
Thank you dear!

Alcina said...

@vaisakhi
Oh! Glad you found it so.
Thank you!

Alcina said...

@Saru Singhal
Gosh those were really heavy words for me.Thanks a ton.

Alcina said...

@Blasphemous Aesthete
Hmm..no comments..keep on judging.

Thank you once again! :P

Alcina said...

@Beyond Horizon
Yep..

Alcina said...

@Eon Heath
All on the view.
Thank you very much.

Hamza Bin Ladin said...

"Passions flooded their being,
hands intertwined,flesh mingled,
thirst and hunger engulfed."

Amazingly Wonderful.
Kudos!

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

So painful...Awesome work

Alcina said...

@HBL
thank you :D :D

P.S.-I m still thinking why did u only chose those lines to write :| :|

Alcina said...

@Valli
Hmm..i see you could connect..
Thanx!