Trembling hands grabbing the air.
Dwindling liquid drops,
fall on paper the ink smears.
With the subtle beats of heart,
she wanted to wipe away the carvings,
of feelings unknown and yearns.
But she forgot;
she could not even touch her heart.
That it was not hers but of his now.
To feel the emollient touch of his hands,
on her surrendered heart.
And the soul stands,
for the unification and blend.
Through the dark alleys,
and bottomless abyss,
they fell through and through,
in their unusual love tale.
Passions flooded their being,
hands intertwined,flesh mingled,
thirst and hunger engulfed.
Proliferated through each pore,
a joyous newness of joining,
of two souls to one whole.
16 comments:
Nice....
beautiful n sensuous write....loved it...:)
Some poems make me wonder the genius behind it, your poem is one of those. I wish I can pen something like this. Lovely.
Love in dark ways, I think I see this as a characteristic of this blog.
Nice post again :)
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Feelings of Pain to sensuous!
Hey, Hi
tha timg is so perfectly suited for the post...n a beautiful post too..
:)
nice...started on a different note, n ended on another. :)
Regards,
Eon...
@blackswanpoetry
Thank you dear!
@vaisakhi
Oh! Glad you found it so.
Thank you!
@Saru Singhal
Gosh those were really heavy words for me.Thanks a ton.
@Blasphemous Aesthete
Hmm..no comments..keep on judging.
Thank you once again! :P
@Beyond Horizon
Yep..
@Eon Heath
All on the view.
Thank you very much.
"Passions flooded their being,
hands intertwined,flesh mingled,
thirst and hunger engulfed."
Amazingly Wonderful.
Kudos!
So painful...Awesome work
@HBL
thank you :D :D
P.S.-I m still thinking why did u only chose those lines to write :| :|
@Valli
Hmm..i see you could connect..
Thanx!
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