Soft snowflakes danced about on bare skin
Night adorned most beautiful jewel in it's collection
Darkness grew haunting and placid
Numbing my senses
Thou grabbed hold of me,
through those invisible strands
Diffusing i were in your presence
There i sublimed
Derived from ecstasy
Beaded with pain
I coalesced with you
For you to forever reign
32 comments:
wo oo....i now realize how much i ve missed ur poems....beautiful....i actually loved the way u ve arrngd the lines...nice work...:)
awesome is th only word..!
So beautiful :-)
oh my GOD
this is awesome- thankyou so much for those sweet messages in my chat box.
and you blog is awesome the whole background and use of color is brilliant- it is so enigmatic.
and this poem is beautiful and the picture is breath taking
tc
For you to forever reign.
Woohoo. You mesmerize me, and place me in absolute awe of you. <3
And hey, the new header is gorgeous.
AWWWWWWWWWWEEEEE-fricking-SSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOMMEEE!!!
Beautifully written dear..:)
beautifully penned Alcina ! and this blog looks more stunning. the dark background really have impact when we are reading your posts :)
There's always a feeling of being possessed in your writings...very beautiful.
I can see snow flakes on your blog too :)
There's always a feeling of being possessed in your writings...very beautiful.
I can see snow flakes on your blog too :)
Beautiful write, Sam. Very nice!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/14/a-thousand-candles/
Oh my! Please forgive me, Alcina. I had a brain freeze, and addressed you as Sam! I had just read one of his poems. So sorry!
mind blowing lines.
well done.
ok... you have a NEW FAN!!! beautiful penning here!!!! ♥
http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2011/12/15/on-the-dock-where-summer-lied/
elegant imagery..
well written entry.
Woooo! Sensual work.. touching I must say!
I am at this link, with a different flavor of love ~
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/12/17/con-ditions-apply-for-the-conman/
You never stop do you? giving goosebumps to the readers..? :)
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Welcome bak..n dat ws such a sweet comment thanx :)
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You found d beauty :) thanx!
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So much of praises in one comment..thanx a ton dear :)
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Thank you..and it was a random choice but with full heart glad you found it gorgeous.
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Thank u..
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Yes exactly that was what i wanted to create as an impact :)
Thank you so much!
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Thank you di :D
Its winterzz..u ought to have some on your blog :)
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Its ok..and thank you..
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Hope they intacted back ;)
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thank you..i guess i am already late to view your but hopefully will jump in soon.
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