"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Thursday, December 08, 2011

Adorned

Soft snowflakes danced about on bare skin
Night adorned most beautiful jewel in it's collection

Darkness grew haunting and placid
Numbing my senses 

Thou grabbed hold of me,
through those invisible strands

Diffusing i were in your presence 
There i sublimed

Derived from ecstasy
Beaded with pain 

I coalesced with you
For you to forever reign

32 comments:

vaisakhi said...

wo oo....i now realize how much i ve missed ur poems....beautiful....i actually loved the way u ve arrngd the lines...nice work...:)

Raghu said...

awesome is th only word..!

Raajii said...

So beautiful :-)

suvaiba said...

oh my GOD
this is awesome- thankyou so much for those sweet messages in my chat box.
and you blog is awesome the whole background and use of color is brilliant- it is so enigmatic.
and this poem is beautiful and the picture is breath taking
tc

Cяystal said...

For you to forever reign.
Woohoo. You mesmerize me, and place me in absolute awe of you. <3

Cяystal said...

And hey, the new header is gorgeous.

Rahul said...

AWWWWWWWWWWEEEEE-fricking-SSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOMMEEE!!!

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Beautifully written dear..:)

Inspector Saahab said...

beautifully penned Alcina ! and this blog looks more stunning. the dark background really have impact when we are reading your posts :)

Beyond Horizon said...

There's always a feeling of being possessed in your writings...very beautiful.

I can see snow flakes on your blog too :)

Beyond Horizon said...

There's always a feeling of being possessed in your writings...very beautiful.

I can see snow flakes on your blog too :)

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Beautiful write, Sam. Very nice!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/14/a-thousand-candles/

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Oh my! Please forgive me, Alcina. I had a brain freeze, and addressed you as Sam! I had just read one of his poems. So sorry!

Morning said...

mind blowing lines.
well done.

magicinthebackyard said...

ok... you have a NEW FAN!!! beautiful penning here!!!! ♥

http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2011/12/15/on-the-dock-where-summer-lied/

Natalie said...

elegant imagery..
well written entry.

Purvi said...

Woooo! Sensual work.. touching I must say!
I am at this link, with a different flavor of love ~
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/12/17/con-ditions-apply-for-the-conman/

Krishnapriya said...

You never stop do you? giving goosebumps to the readers..? :)

Alcina said...

@vaisakhi
Welcome bak..n dat ws such a sweet comment thanx :)

Alcina said...

@Raghu
Thank you :)

Alcina said...

@Raajii
You found d beauty :) thanx!
Hope you had a happy visit here!
keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@suvaiba
So much of praises in one comment..thanx a ton dear :)

Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@Cяystal
Thank you..and it was a random choice but with full heart glad you found it gorgeous.

Alcina said...

@Rahul
Thank u!

Alcina said...

@⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺
Thank u..

Alcina said...

@Inspector Saahab
Yes exactly that was what i wanted to create as an impact :)
Thank you so much!

Alcina said...

@Beyond Horizon
Thank you di :D
Its winterzz..u ought to have some on your blog :)

Alcina said...

@Marbles in My Pocket
Its ok..and thank you..

Alcina said...

@Morning
Hope they intacted back ;)
thank you!

Alcina said...

@Natalie
thanx..
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@Purvi
thank you..i guess i am already late to view your but hopefully will jump in soon.
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@Krishnapriya
Aww..thank u..u always are so kind with appreciation..