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Saturday, December 24, 2011

Breathless

Can hear the whispers.
Indulge in proliferating presence.
Through the silent walls breaths echo.
Wincing and withering;
Resuscitating and repulsing.
Rolling inside and out,
penetrating so deep through and through.
Arousing and falling,
the crests and troughs,
of one beating heart that's ours.
Living and dying, 
remained without difference.
Enrapturing fiery seduction,
accompanied snarls and thrills.
Bare one soul lies breathless..


26 comments:

Ovais said...

Breathless!

The Guy In The Mirror said...

Amazing :O

Cяystal said...

Like always, beautiful. <3

Merry Christmas btw :D

Krishnapriya said...

It is not just breathless but untimately sensous too!! how can u write like this..! I cant even imagine!!! All I can write about is a Rebel and Shadow.. :D
hats off! keep writing!

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

That was greatly written and apt picture :)

Alcina said...

@Ovais
Thats the title :P
it left you so..? :-o
thanks!

Alcina said...

@The Guy in the mirror
thank you! :)

Alcina said...

@Cяystal
:) Thank yeww ^_^

Same to ya!

Alcina said...

@Krishnapriya
Oh puhleez..you write even brilliantly..i am still a naive :P
You write much more than a shadow and rebel i have read it :)
thanx a ton!

Alcina said...

@⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺
Thank you..i guess no one would have talked about the image like you did..thanks again :)

Ishiyeta Saxena said...

OhMyGod!
You are TOO good. :)

PS. I'll follow this blog now! It's very much alive. ;)

Xx<3

Alcina said...

@Ishiyeta
Thank you thank you..
Yeah i think you notice the liveliness by the poem ;) :P

<3

Keep chiming..

~*Princesa Fiona*~ said...

Hola Alcina!

You write wonderfully! Your blog is very creative ~ love the title :)

"Arousing and falling,
the crests and troughs,
of one beating heart that's ours."

Loved this line!

Thanks so much for visiting my blog and blessing me with such lovely feedback ~ much appreciated! SO happy to have you as my new reader!

Best Wishes,
Fiona :)

Chèvrefeuille said...

Wonderful, I am speechless. What a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

Dasuntoucha said...

Sensual piece of writing.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

This is beautiful and sensual!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/another-will-be-born/

Bodhirose said...

Very sensual...you write with great emotion and feeling. Well done, I enjoyed this.

lynnaima said...

I think I remember what that used to be about or feel like lol, nice pic.
enjoy the rally!!!

http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/souls-paradise/

Lady Whispers said...

Absolutely breathless and sensual :)
Loved it :)

Anonymous said...

I love your last two lines:

"accompanied snarls and thrills.
Bare one soul lies breathless"

~Shawna
(rosemarymint.wordpress.com)

Isadora said...

A lots of emotions in this writing. I enjoyed it very much.
Happy Rally ...
Isadora
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/i-was-the-child/

tasithoughts said...

Hot! and deeply emotional.

Jp

http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/12/30/my-heart-sings/

Heaven said...

breathless indeed ~

happy new year ~

http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2011/12/still.html

Ankush Samant said...

sensational composition!

Purvi said...

I loved your blog and dropping b y at it here. Thanks for inviting. :)

magdalenahermanstories said...

Sensual piece. Leaves me breathless!