Memories weaved through moments,
glacier like they flood my soul tonight!
Wetting my parched heart on the way,
air of nostalgia speeding past.
Tinging pale blue longing in being,
chilling the dimmed surround Oh! so slow.
Warmth that i sense,
nearing I coadunate with you.
14 comments:
Very beautiful Alcina!
Hi ,
very nicely penned down thoughts ..lovely.
P.s: how you doing BTW..
Very well-said :D
Short and sweet :-)
Alcina, you have said a lot in these few lines..I love your style of writing...sometimes , I write poetry too but cannot write like you, cannot say so much in so few words...I tend to explain myself even in poems, rather than leaving it to the readers:-)
Anyway, thank you for sharing this beautiful poem of love & longing with us !
have a nice day!
@Crystal
It is said beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder.You just got those beautiful insights inside you :)
@Vivek
Thank you
P.S.-I am doing ok :) thank you for asking
@Confused soul
If you say so :)
@Green Speck
I can see short..don't know about the sweet part hehehe..
Thank you :)
@La Dolce Vita
Your comments flatter me always.You are so kind while appreciating.Thanks a ton :)
woww Alci... beautifuly described... lovely :)
@anjali
Thank you dear :)
lovely expressions.
Intimacy well expressed!
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