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Thursday, March 17, 2011

Blindfolded..


I laughed at myself,
was turned around after the blindfold.
He gave assurance with his words,
left me to find him.
In the deep forest that i was being led to,
i didn't knew it was such lovely pain,
To touch him back!
Let him open the tie!
I stood there, 
the whole world was all black.
I dared on the journey, 
to let know that path of glory.
The steps weren't trodden before,
with each step i could encounter, 
a slither,
a bite,
a prick,
a soul,
a ghost,
a cover,
a linger, 
or just him..
But after i walked a while,
I knew i wasn't led the right way,
 didn't lead to him.
It lead to a cliff, 
from where i would fall forever.
So i laughed at myself,
was turned around after that blindfold.
The betrayal turned ecstatic,
as i stood there, 
waiting for the game end.

16 comments:

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi

Well, that was something different...as in, i donno how or why, but kinda felt that the way you have described or rather created the situation, its unique in a way...

Nice read.

Regards,
The Silhouette...

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

though she knew that she was being led into a hoax, an illusion, an end?
Strange, yet justifiable. Pleasure in pain, is that it?

Blasphemous Aesthete

Ph_ said...

Cool blog you've got :)

Holly said...

So sexy!

rivercat said...

Absolutely wonderful blog!
Your words ring true, so
glad I found you:)



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JAGDISH BALI said...

So it was a learning process. Well done !

Alcina said...

@Eon
Glad that could be different..
Thanks!

Alcina said...

@Blasphemous Aesthete
She had blind faith which was immense and only broken when she was actually blindfolded..
Yes and it was pleasure in pain indeed!

Alcina said...

@Ph_
Thanks a lot..
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@Holly
:) ..Very different a view

Thanks for the visit
Hope you had a happy one!
Keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@rivercat
Smiling to read your words :)

Thanks a ton

Hope you had a happy visit here!

Keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@JAGDISH
Many views for a single piece..It was surely a learning process but with a end of fall into abyss

Hema Nimbekar said...

hey
wonderful blog..blind faith is like lottery system..u can won a loyal person..or lose him/her and get cheated...I m following ur blog..

good to see u here..I m glad u found me and my blog.....

keep in touch...keep visiting my blog too...

Alcina said...

@Hemu di
Very true :)

Thanks..same here :)

Yeah sure will keep in touch!
Hope you had a happy visit here!

Keep chiming!

Raghu said...

A different one from u.. worth thinking..!!

lynnaima said...

RIVETING!! :)
Enjoy the rally!

http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/05/19/a-little-while-longer/