I laughed at myself,
was turned around after the blindfold.
He gave assurance with his words,
left me to find him.
In the deep forest that i was being led to,
i didn't knew it was such lovely pain,
To touch him back!
Let him open the tie!
I stood there,
the whole world was all black.
I dared on the journey,
to let know that path of glory.
The steps weren't trodden before,
with each step i could encounter,
a slither,
a bite,
a prick,
a soul,
a ghost,
a cover,
a linger,
or just him..
But after i walked a while,
I knew i wasn't led the right way,
didn't lead to him.
It lead to a cliff,
from where i would fall forever.
So i laughed at myself,
was turned around after that blindfold.
The betrayal turned ecstatic,
as i stood there,
waiting for the game end.
16 comments:
Hey, Hi
Well, that was something different...as in, i donno how or why, but kinda felt that the way you have described or rather created the situation, its unique in a way...
Nice read.
Regards,
The Silhouette...
though she knew that she was being led into a hoax, an illusion, an end?
Strange, yet justifiable. Pleasure in pain, is that it?
Blasphemous Aesthete
Cool blog you've got :)
So sexy!
Absolutely wonderful blog!
Your words ring true, so
glad I found you:)
Crying With A Sense Of Human
So it was a learning process. Well done !
@Eon
Glad that could be different..
Thanks!
@Blasphemous Aesthete
She had blind faith which was immense and only broken when she was actually blindfolded..
Yes and it was pleasure in pain indeed!
@Ph_
Thanks a lot..
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!
@Holly
:) ..Very different a view
Thanks for the visit
Hope you had a happy one!
Keep chiming!
@rivercat
Smiling to read your words :)
Thanks a ton
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!
@JAGDISH
Many views for a single piece..It was surely a learning process but with a end of fall into abyss
hey
wonderful blog..blind faith is like lottery system..u can won a loyal person..or lose him/her and get cheated...I m following ur blog..
good to see u here..I m glad u found me and my blog.....
keep in touch...keep visiting my blog too...
@Hemu di
Very true :)
Thanks..same here :)
Yeah sure will keep in touch!
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!
A different one from u.. worth thinking..!!
RIVETING!! :)
Enjoy the rally!
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