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Saturday, March 05, 2011

Change

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton Season 2 edition 18; the eighteenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
"Seasons change there mood so swift.
Seconds grow down to minutes,
minutes multiply and create hours,
hours in turn produce the days,
days gather up and form months,
months crowd out and year is made up."

Her spirited laugh echoed in air,
she was swinging in her toy.
The tears announced her as a graduate.
Agony streaked eyes; 
her lover has betrayed,
playing with her as if a game.
The night of bidding farewell to her home,
she had to make up one house of her own.
New persons mingling in her life.
She created her new paradise pretty nice.
Bunch of flowers bloomed in her lap.
She had her babies, 
and was addressed as mom.
Her garden full of love and cheer.
She grew old and witnessed, 
what her mother would have once.
Her children growing and parting, 
as the destiny had planned.
Withering away the life was,
little by little the breathe that got lost.
She journeyed down her life once again,
in her thoughts of growing and change.
Death prevailed in those serene eyes.

"Seasons changed there moods.
Seconds grew down to minutes,
minutes multiplied and created hours,
hours turned to produce the days,
days gathered up and formed months,
months crowded out and year was made up."


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22 comments:

The Fool said...

Interesting poetry bringing out nicely the concept of change in human life and how time moves and brings on change.

Md. Muddassir Shah said...

"Seasons changed there moods.
Seconds grew down to minutes,
minutes multiplied and created hours,
hours turned to produce the days,
days gathered up and formed months,
months crowded out and year was made up"

lovely words. lovely . Very well written. Good luck with the contest. Hope you win

xyzandme said...

Awesomeness!!!

MAVERICK said...

What a beautiful and well composed poem it was.Indeed our role in life changes, and with every experience we gain perfection.Loved it.All the best

Someone is Special said...

"Her spirited laugh echoed in air", beautiful piece.. Loved it.. Smiles, mine is what most people feel in their heart but no one acts to achieve it, Change

Someone is Special

Simran said...

Wow!!
Loved that comparison you made between changing era and changes comes in our life as the time passes..

Good Luck :)
Take care!

Aashish Sood said...

Well written descriptive piece... though I kind of miss the rhymings... also there seem to be some mis spellings etc... do check.

I have not had much experience with poems... so i tried to change that and short poem myself.. do go through it.

Vivek Chamoli said...

Very Nice poem ,
Yes change is the univeral truth and it will keep on happening..irrespective of how much we try to make it remain constant thats nature for you :)

ALL THE BEST FOR BAT :)

Alcina said...

@The fool
Glad that was able to create the interest :)

Hope you had a happy visit!!

Alcina said...

@Md. Mudassir
Thanks a lot for this love filled praise :)

Wish you the same :)

Alcina said...

@xyzandme

Thanxxx :)

Alcina said...

@MAVERICK
Thank you..ATB :)

Alcina said...

@SIS
Thanks ya surely will check it out :)

Alcina said...

@Simo
Thanks sweety for the wish :)
U take care too
and keep smiling always..

Alcina said...

@ Aashish Sood

Poems not only are based on rhyming but many other things..each poem has a different style,and mine doesn't contain any rhymes :).

And ya there is one spelling which is wrong will rectify asap

Alcina said...

@Vivek
thank you.. :)
yes for sure it's constant and nature's rule.

Geeta Singh said...

lovely poem:)

Pratibha The Talent said...

That was a nice change indeed.

Alcina said...

@Geeta

Thank you :)
hope you had a happy visit here!!

Alcina said...

@Pratibha

Thats how it should look :) Change as nice

though i don't like it at all :P

Saket Dabi said...

Thanks for coming to my blog , I liked your theme , the pics u used , and ofcourse the poem :) seasons yea right that even my fav topic a couple of poems on spring :) and summer. Fab work done!

Alcina said...

@Saket
My pleasure :)
Thank you..Glad that season is your favorite topic somewhere u can also find its quite favorite for me too i have talked about every season leaving behind summer :P
Thanks again