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Thursday, March 24, 2011

Insomnia

Each pore of cut that was made,
with the blade digging deep.
Each crimson drop that fell.
Like the falling grains of time.
Watching the infinity in front of eyes,
it seem to be never ending.
But it had a point; 
from where he may start a fresh.
Lonesome soul possessor, 
body without a heart inside,
mind that was clogged and plagued.
Touch that was not able to reach any human. 
Ghastly silence that got created, 
everywhere it roamed in infinity.
The cold wind that were blowing through the hole.
Burning the desires high and ferocious.
Meanings of words lost in the air.
Feel vanished in an instant.
Deciphering the codes was impossible.
Eyes that were not shutting at all,
heavy and in need of something.
The poison that ran through the flesh,
bitten he was by insomnia.

19 comments:

Hema Nimbekar said...

well written...

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi
never did the word insomnia seem so dark as your words make it...that was a real nice piece...beautiful.

Regards,
The Silhouette...

rivercat said...

beautifully worded. I can relate to this.
<3

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

aah insomnia, I wonder do they really sleep. The hole? are we imagining things, that are not real, or does insomnia bring about a new reality, when a part of our brain sleeps, and another unexplored part away from normal conscience awakes.
Nice lines.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Simran said...

Very beautifully you explained about an accompanied and depressed soul in search of peace and relief.
You have a beautiful way of expressing the things so clearly..
All over a very touching post full of unusual feelings.

Keep Expressing Dear
Take care :)

Deepika said...

Painful poetry... Brilliant work!

Valli said...

Explained the feelings behind Insomnia very well...Very beautifully written..:]

Happy Blogging!

Saumya said...

too deep a description...could feel the pain....nice piece of poetry :)

विवेक Call me Vish !! said...

superbly written dear !! i love the way u express ur feeling !! nice blog and thanks for visiting my blog keep regular come !!

Alcina said...

@Hemu di thank you :)

Alcina said...

@Eon
My blog has mostly this shade..you have more to discover the darker side :)
Thank you so much

Alcina said...

@rivercat
I am glad you can relate dear..
thanx :)

Alcina said...

@Blasphemous Aesthete
It is as you see it :) ..

Thank you!

Alcina said...

@Simo
Thanx darling..my pleasure that you could have it as simple :)

Alcina said...

@Deepika
Thanks dear..the pain is the most pleasurable when exceeds the so called limit :)

Hope you had a happy visit here!
keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@Valli
Thank you
Keep chiming! :D

Alcina said...

@Saumya
Deep..hmm..you felt it really well then :)
Thank you :)
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@Vish
Thanks a lot..
I would try my best and as soon i can :)

Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!

some unspoken words said...

the way you have explained is awesome. :)