This entry is submitted by me for Thursday Poets Rally Week 44,
Misted air of laziness covered up.
Misted air of laziness covered up.
Resuscitating from the blown smoke in air.
Iris hued blue ,opened wide staring infinity.
Galaxy of untouched and unscathed mysteries unfurled,
Aficionado like he flew through them.
Nostalgia sped past while reviving her memories.
Kef it was as her reflection drugged him.
Dolce as she liked to address him echoed in his ears today.
Ubique her aura surrounded and he submerged.
Beguiled smile of her imaged in his eyes,
Eroding the left patience and calm.
Yearning was reignited yet again.
Glossary-
Kef-State of dream or drug-induced repose
Dolce-Sweet
Ubique-Everywhere
31 comments:
Nice...loved the last line :)
Hey, Hi
i donno, but a wave of nostalgis just washed through me...and i crave for the solace of that smoke to rise again..
beautiful....
Regards,
The Silhouette...
Reliving the old memories brings a distant face, to face. And then I see, again, what I once had saw in her, and let out a sigh.
Nice read Alcina :)
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
another good one from you..
ah you capture we those moments of falling for someone...out worldview is opened so wide and shrunk so small in the same moment...i feel the longing for sure...
beautiful! thanks for the definitions!
and thank you for the visit and comment on my second blog One souls journey on moreworksofhope.blogspot.com
take care!
That was a lovely memory of her!!
something different,and I like it
nice blog....embedded with msg...keep writing...
Writer , a superb piece but then color red is glaring to readers eyes .. an sure will be hooked with your pieces..
Sweet message.
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Jai Ho Mangalmay HO
i love the mysterious quality
Beautiful just beautifu. I look forward to all of your pieces.
lovely imagery,
your words are stunning, the universe, the emotions of her and him, together make a perfect match.
Happy Rally.
lovely imagery,
your words are stunning, the universe, the emotions of her and him, together make a perfect match.
Happy Rally.
I enjoyed your use of words very much! As a lover of words I found the way you juxtaposition some of them was very clever.
I found myself caught up in your words and the images they created, great job!
Loved the imagery you've used - it was really vivid to me. Brilliant way of setting out a great tale.
The Lonely Recluse.
"Nostalgia sped past while reviving her memories"
Nice word imagery! The pains of lost love wrapped up in memories ... one day they can be appear without summoning the same pain ...
profound words, beautiful imagery and lovely choice of words-Thanks for enhancing my vocab with some beautiful words.
Nice tightly written longing.
Beautifully written =)
Like the way you introduces new words in your poems each time.. beautifully penned and Nice template! :)
Take care
i love this a lot.. Here is my rally post, ~ come on idiot, you are for me ~
! Happy Sunday !
Someone is Special
Lyrical and mysterious.
This is lovely.Beautiful imagery :)
ONly people who are experiencing mad love can write like this...effortlessly oozing it from their fingers
awesome writing
Very nice use of language without losing imagery. Thanks so much for sharing.
last line was touching
as always you know how to touch
nostalgic and beautiful at the same time....enjoyed the poem...thanks for sharing :)
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