"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Monday, May 16, 2011

Her memory..

This entry is submitted by me for Thursday Poets Rally Week 44,


Misted air of laziness covered up.                                          
Resuscitating from the blown smoke in air.
Iris hued blue ,opened wide staring infinity.
Galaxy of untouched and unscathed mysteries unfurled, 
Aficionado like he flew through them.
Nostalgia sped past while reviving her memories.
Kef it was as her reflection drugged him.
Dolce as she liked to address him echoed in his ears today.
Ubique her aura surrounded and he submerged.
Beguiled smile of her imaged in his eyes,
Eroding the left patience and calm.
Yearning was reignited yet again.

Glossary-
Kef-State of dream or drug-induced repose
Dolce-Sweet
Ubique-Everywhere

31 comments:

Lilangel said...

Nice...loved the last line :)

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi
i donno, but a wave of nostalgis just washed through me...and i crave for the solace of that smoke to rise again..

beautiful....


Regards,
The Silhouette...

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Reliving the old memories brings a distant face, to face. And then I see, again, what I once had saw in her, and let out a sigh.

Nice read Alcina :)

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Raghu said...

another good one from you..

Brian Miller said...

ah you capture we those moments of falling for someone...out worldview is opened so wide and shrunk so small in the same moment...i feel the longing for sure...

Hope said...

beautiful! thanks for the definitions!

and thank you for the visit and comment on my second blog One souls journey on moreworksofhope.blogspot.com

take care!

the other side of me said...

That was a lovely memory of her!!

something different,and I like it

Hema Nimbekar said...

nice blog....embedded with msg...keep writing...

Angel said...

Writer , a superb piece but then color red is glaring to readers eyes .. an sure will be hooked with your pieces..

TheFusionTea said...

Sweet message.

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robin said...

i love the mysterious quality

blackswanpoetry said...

Beautiful just beautifu. I look forward to all of your pieces.

Jingle said...

lovely imagery,

your words are stunning, the universe, the emotions of her and him, together make a perfect match.

Happy Rally.

Jingle said...

lovely imagery,

your words are stunning, the universe, the emotions of her and him, together make a perfect match.

Happy Rally.

Poetry Road said...

I enjoyed your use of words very much! As a lover of words I found the way you juxtaposition some of them was very clever.

Thoughts Not Lost said...

I found myself caught up in your words and the images they created, great job!

lonelyrecluse said...

Loved the imagery you've used - it was really vivid to me. Brilliant way of setting out a great tale.
The Lonely Recluse.

beccagivens said...

"Nostalgia sped past while reviving her memories"

Nice word imagery! The pains of lost love wrapped up in memories ... one day they can be appear without summoning the same pain ...

Butterflies of time said...

profound words, beautiful imagery and lovely choice of words-Thanks for enhancing my vocab with some beautiful words.

The Unknowngnome said...

Nice tightly written longing.

mindlovemisery said...

Beautifully written =)

Simran said...

Like the way you introduces new words in your poems each time.. beautifully penned and Nice template! :)
Take care

Someone is Special said...

i love this a lot.. Here is my rally post, ~ come on idiot, you are for me ~

! Happy Sunday !

Someone is Special

Harry Nicholson said...

Lyrical and mysterious.

Jay said...

This is lovely.Beautiful imagery :)

woih said...

ONly people who are experiencing mad love can write like this...effortlessly oozing it from their fingers

awesome writing

Fred said...

Very nice use of language without losing imagery. Thanks so much for sharing.

Red Handed said...

last line was touching
as always you know how to touch

moonscribbles said...

nostalgic and beautiful at the same time....enjoyed the poem...thanks for sharing :)

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