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Wednesday, May 04, 2011

Bloody Dream..

 This entry is submitted by me for Thursday Poets Rally Week 43,

Engulfing the radiance taking out just a cerulean.
As the evening light turns thinner.
Comes in the pretty enchanter,
a lovely blue moon peeps out of the sky.
I see a familiar effigy of someone so close,
shining out of the then turned black sky.
As I reach a little close to it as I feel,
a shadow comes from back and holds me by hands.
Comforting that touch feels rebirth instant.
A mask it wears the countenance this time.
In a flash of second reveals his true signs.
Humming a tune for the first time today.
Makes me loose my senses that were alright!
Tremulous I become falling in his arms,
he chariotest’s me to his dark world apart.
Serves me with red blood like wine,
introducing me to chapelle ardente.
Red roses surround he starts a cavatina.
My heart craves in need of more to hear.
Catoptric face his eyes meet mine.
Love has always united us indeed for right.
Thine majesty order me to present some grace,
He brings a silver tiara it looks great.
His words then echo telling the worth of it,
telling it is the only way we get to meet.
Placing it on my head I gleam,
making the universe look in surprise.
He smiles and says now you can come here, 
whenever you wish to.
Smiling I am speechless from the time I arrived.
Kissing each other we fill the air with sweet aroma,
invigorating our lives in just moments that got by.
Forever is the way we stay close,
end for beginning a new.
Splurging desires fulfilling thou’s need,
effacing we both for each other to lead.
Clasping me in his warmth,
i feel the heat so intense and divine.

Whispering in my ears then he unfolds a clandestine
Tells me about the clairvoyance we share
I shimmer with utmost joy.
Fuliginous the sky we watch together.
A gash is made on both our wrists,
Blood mixes weaves a wonderful dream..



Picture Courtesy

Thank You Jingle
I am honored
and i want to nominate 
tOuCh

24 comments:

Jingle said...

well done,

love is sweet, keep it alive.
Happy Rally.

Raghu said...

Superb..!

Saumya said...

though the description was too dark...but appreciable....nice imagery....must say wonderful vocab you got :)

vaisakhi said...

awesome write...realy dark yet grippin prose poem...loved it...n glad to see someones poem wid unusual words...:)

विवेक Call me Vish !! said...

Placing it on my head I gleam,
making the universe look in surprise.
He smiles and says now you can come here,
whenever you wish to.............so close so near your post everyone hearts .......i proud of your writing skill!!

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi
all i would say is, "A Story well recited..."

:)

Regards,
The Silhouette...

blackswanpoetry said...

very beautiful...invigorating our lives in just moments that got by! awesome And great pic with it. You always do such a nice job of that.

My post is here
http://blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/05/05/poem-can%E2%80%99t-believe-it%E2%80%99s-you/

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Damn, if love was so excruciatingly blissful, only a few would do it. Well, only a few do it truly, but still... very nice.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

moonscribbles said...

lovely wordplay :) beautiful poem ...

NotATameBlog said...

I love the inexorable sense of motion in this poem. Thank you for sharing this poem.

lonelyrecluse said...

Odd but intresting. Great imagery and many leveled terminology. Enjoyable read.
The Lonely Recluse.

Deepika said...

Deep dark dream... thirst for life won't die unless we get what we want. Life ends but dreams stay.. Fulfills or unfulfilled, doesn't matter.

Isabel said...

Congrats on the award!

newtha said...

very thought provoking!
:)

glh said...

Powerful imagery and word choices. Congratulations on your award too x

Beyond Horizon said...

Dark yet wonderful that's how it is!

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

awesome…………perfectly done.
Thanks…come to poetry potluck if you can, appreciate your input.

Brian Miller said...

the intensity of that love is almost overwelming...yet oh so beautiful...

Alcina said...

@Jingle,Raghu,Saumya,vaisakhi,Vish,Eon,Swan,Blasphemous aesthete,Deepika,glh,Beyond horizon,Promising Poets Parking Lot,Brian Miller

Thanks for those lovely words..and i would hope to keep upto your words :)..

tc

Alcina said...

@moonscribbles
Thanks a lot :) ..Welcome on my blog

Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@NotATameBlog
Your appreciation left me in awe :) ..my pleasure sharing it to you..and you are welcome..

Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@lonelyrecluse
Thank you..I m glad u cud enjoy it..

Hope you had a happy visit here!!

Keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@Isabel
Thank you!

Hope you had a happy visit here!!
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@glh
Thank you!

Alcina said...

@newtha
Thank you..I am happy that it could stir some in you too!

hope you had a happy visit here!!
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