Gripping my soul in your hand..You are the one who is ruling me..!
well done,love is sweet, keep it alive.Happy Rally.
though the description was too dark...but appreciable....nice imagery....must say wonderful vocab you got :)
awesome write...realy dark yet grippin prose poem...loved it...n glad to see someones poem wid unusual words...:)
Placing it on my head I gleam,making the universe look in surprise.He smiles and says now you can come here, whenever you wish to.............so close so near your post everyone hearts .......i proud of your writing skill!!
Hey, Hiall i would say is, "A Story well recited...":)Regards,The Silhouette...
very beautiful...invigorating our lives in just moments that got by! awesome And great pic with it. You always do such a nice job of that. My post is herehttp://blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/05/05/poem-can%E2%80%99t-believe-it%E2%80%99s-you/
Damn, if love was so excruciatingly blissful, only a few would do it. Well, only a few do it truly, but still... very nice.Cheers,Blasphemous Aesthete
lovely wordplay :) beautiful poem ...
I love the inexorable sense of motion in this poem. Thank you for sharing this poem.
Odd but intresting. Great imagery and many leveled terminology. Enjoyable read.The Lonely Recluse.
Deep dark dream... thirst for life won't die unless we get what we want. Life ends but dreams stay.. Fulfills or unfulfilled, doesn't matter.
Congrats on the award!
very thought provoking!:)
Powerful imagery and word choices. Congratulations on your award too x
Dark yet wonderful that's how it is!
awesome…………perfectly done.Thanks…come to poetry potluck if you can, appreciate your input.
the intensity of that love is almost overwelming...yet oh so beautiful...
@Jingle,Raghu,Saumya,vaisakhi,Vish,Eon,Swan,Blasphemous aesthete,Deepika,glh,Beyond horizon,Promising Poets Parking Lot,Brian MillerThanks for those lovely words..and i would hope to keep upto your words :)..tc
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