From dusk till dawn,
he stays on my mind.
Dark and sensuous is how,
he is described.
Consuming me with wisps of his kiss.
I let him smolder my inside.
Elation is what he does to me.
On the lonely nights,
when the moon hides,
stars loose out their gleam,
he accompanies me.
Caresses my every pore,
pouring himself inside me.
Bitter is how I have loved him,
sweetness is prohibited.
The wafting smell gets me high,
enamoring my heart in yearn.
Passionate,fluffy and poised in grace,
i lick him till the end.
He steals my heart,
and leaves me craving.
My love for him is forever indeed.
23 comments:
Hey, Hi
well well...a double shot of espresso!! and poison it is....with a smoke to compliment the bitter taste...perfect. And so are your words for it...
:D
Regards,
The Silhouette...
It looked like you were defining my love for a cup of hot coffee :P :)
Nice, I'll gulp it at once :D
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
very cool Alcina. Consuming me with wisps of his kiss.
Is a great line :) Have a great week.
Very interesting. All our senses are indeed aroused by love. :)
Hmm..even with no moon or stars, there is the light of his love forever...
superb! enjoy while hot :)
sweetness prohibited...awww....that was too sweet :)
i superliked BA's comment...hot coffee....lolzz
wonderously sensual...of course coffee does it for me too...ha.
i really enjoyed this post..i wrote something like this for a cake,check it out,if you want:
http://crossroads-tarunima.blogspot.com/2011/05/rainbow-and-butterflies-cake-for-poetry.html
Writer , ahhh thought what it was , it's everybodys' addiction coffee! Nice !
Sensual....
You can swept us by your words....
@Eon Heath
A very big compliment indeed..Thank you*
*conditions apply
@Blasphemous aesthete
Yes yes!! I am doing that only..
Glad that you would gulp this!
thank you!
@blackswanpoetry
I like that one too :) ..thank you dear
@Rachel Hoyt
Yes they are..Thank you
hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming!
@Beyond horizon
There is always a moon and those stars just that invisible and wanting you to njoy some other companions too sometimes :)
@bendedspoon
Thanks..hope you did that!
@Saumya
Yeah! prohibited..
:)
@Brian Miller
Nice to know :)
@tarunima
Thank you so much..Will check it out asap!
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming!
@Angel
Wow privileged to get such a designation ..Thank you so much..
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming!
@Nikita
Just the right word :)
Thank you..I am glad i could sweep you too..
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
keep chiming!
Adore your poem
"wafting love' nice one.
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