"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Monday, October 03, 2011

Teaser!?

This poem is submitted by me for Thursday Poets Rally 53!
Ruffled up countenance.
Cascading hairs fall down.
A rhythmic caress, 
ticklish touches,
a smile so naughty, 
a pounce so wild.
The heavy breathing,
merged with pulsating soul.
Cold skin collides! 
Becoming sweaty; 
in the bloody ordeal of,
pinching..scratching..tearing..biting..
Temptation of the trickle, 
drawing beats closer.
Crimson beads fall joyously all around and over.
Fueling the residing passion,lust and anger.
A seemingly last blow silences it all.
Stares grown warm shared with each other.
Hunger rests upon hunger,
smothering over one another.
Tightening the grips, 
was it just the teaser?

32 comments:

PeeVee said...

Oooh like this, teaser. Captures the mood of foreplay well:)

Daydreamertoo said...

Phewwww... hot, sensual, sexy write.

kshawnedgar said...

Bloody sweat. Mostly good. But sink deeper in detail, your stake is only pricking the pale surface. Write hard.

Morning said...

love it,

very visual and lovely imagery.

nicolewian said...

Wow. Very contradictory images you've conjured for me. This piece is impacting.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Powerful and erotic write! Very well done.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/05/treasure/

kshawnedgar said...

Bloody sweat. Mostly good. But sink deeper in detail, your stake is only pricking the pale surface. Write hard.

Kathy Bischoping said...

Eeee, actually the narrator is making me nervous or frightened here.

Old Raven said...

Ah ... passion unleashed!

Old Raven said...

OK I thought that I posted a comment ... upon passion unleashed. For this is most definitely what I felt.

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Passionate poem. Great ending.

Here is my entry:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/10/everyone.html

Ann LeFlore said...

I am not sure if tightening the grip was a tease or not but this is a lovely poem and well penned.
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/05/today%e2%80%99s-feelings/

RoHiT Iyer said...

Nice post! I like the intensity.
Keep writing!!

--
RoHiT

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Love the imagery you use and the photo is excellent. Fills one with longing.


Melanie

Alcina said...

@PeeVee
The one who has done it would be able to tell it right :)
But as for now i am not the one :P
Thanks for the appreciation
Hope you had a happy visit here??
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

Daydreamertoo
Supposedly it had all the appropriate effects it could have on you ;)
Thank you!

Alcina said...

@kshawnedgar
Thats why may be i pose the question Teaser!?
:) and you supposedly the only one answering it..
Thank you and will try getting more details the next time i write something like this.
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@Morning
Thanks a ton :)

Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@nicolewian
Thank you so much..
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@Marbles in My Pocket
Thank you :)

Alcina said...

@Kathy Bischoping
Very possible as your name in itself tells me you are Bischoping..sorry for the inconvenience caused :|
Hope you overcome the fear soon :)

Thanks for chiming..
and hope that when do overcome your fear you may visit once more !

Alcina said...

@Old Raven
A much more hotter in degree you can say :)
Thanks!

Alcina said...

@Jack Edwards Poetry
Thank you so much..
Will check yours soon..

Alcina said...

@Ann LeFlore
Thank you dear :)

Alcina said...

@Rohit Iyer
I didn't intend to be so intense :P
Thank you

Alcina said...

@Cassiopeia Rises
Thank you
And surely does :)

shail said...

This sure is a teaser! :)

crimsoncorvus said...

this poem was so hot that i sweat profusely! whew! nicely done! filled with passion!

Alex Dissing said...

For lack of a better phrase, this is a passionate piece. Nicely done.

Alcina said...

@shail
Thank you :)

Hope you had a happy visit!!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@crimsoncorvus
Its a pleasure receiving you on my blog first of all :)
Hope the sweat did some good ;)
Thank you very much!

Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@Alex Dissing
That said it all :)
Thank you very much..

Hope you had a happy visit!!
Keep chiming..