Can hear the whispers.
Indulge in proliferating presence.
Through the silent walls breaths echo.
Wincing and withering;
Resuscitating and repulsing.
Rolling inside and out,
penetrating so deep through and through.
Arousing and falling,
the crests and troughs,
of one beating heart that's ours.
Living and dying,
remained without difference.
Enrapturing fiery seduction,
accompanied snarls and thrills.
Bare one soul lies breathless..
26 comments:
Breathless!
Amazing :O
Like always, beautiful. <3
Merry Christmas btw :D
It is not just breathless but untimately sensous too!! how can u write like this..! I cant even imagine!!! All I can write about is a Rebel and Shadow.. :D
hats off! keep writing!
That was greatly written and apt picture :)
@Ovais
Thats the title :P
it left you so..? :-o
thanks!
@The Guy in the mirror
thank you! :)
@Cяystal
:) Thank yeww ^_^
Same to ya!
@Krishnapriya
Oh puhleez..you write even brilliantly..i am still a naive :P
You write much more than a shadow and rebel i have read it :)
thanx a ton!
@⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺
Thank you..i guess no one would have talked about the image like you did..thanks again :)
OhMyGod!
You are TOO good. :)
PS. I'll follow this blog now! It's very much alive. ;)
Xx<3
@Ishiyeta
Thank you thank you..
Yeah i think you notice the liveliness by the poem ;) :P
<3
Keep chiming..
Hola Alcina!
You write wonderfully! Your blog is very creative ~ love the title :)
"Arousing and falling,
the crests and troughs,
of one beating heart that's ours."
Loved this line!
Thanks so much for visiting my blog and blessing me with such lovely feedback ~ much appreciated! SO happy to have you as my new reader!
Best Wishes,
Fiona :)
Wonderful, I am speechless. What a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.
Sensual piece of writing.
This is beautiful and sensual!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/another-will-be-born/
Very sensual...you write with great emotion and feeling. Well done, I enjoyed this.
I think I remember what that used to be about or feel like lol, nice pic.
enjoy the rally!!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/souls-paradise/
Absolutely breathless and sensual :)
Loved it :)
I love your last two lines:
"accompanied snarls and thrills.
Bare one soul lies breathless"
~Shawna
(rosemarymint.wordpress.com)
A lots of emotions in this writing. I enjoyed it very much.
Happy Rally ...
Isadora
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/i-was-the-child/
Hot! and deeply emotional.
Jp
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/12/30/my-heart-sings/
breathless indeed ~
happy new year ~
http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2011/12/still.html
sensational composition!
I loved your blog and dropping b y at it here. Thanks for inviting. :)
Sensual piece. Leaves me breathless!
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