I decided i wont talk anymore.I picked up my broken heart and moved towards the exit that i thought was nearest.Coming out i couldn't breathe anymore.Snow flakes touched me softly everywhere,my bare skin tingling to the sensation.I loved him from every bit of my throbbing heart.I told him that but those were on deaf ears.He liked to torture with the diplomacy of not stating the truth.I had left without letting the words out to him "Goodbye" but that was not the way to end.I had left it hanging like he had me.I stumbled with the next step i took on the ice floor that was created almost out of nowhere.Before i could feel the numb ground he held or so i thought and i submerged deep.Sinking where i didn't know,all was dark around.My heart pained.Eyes moistened with the need oozing out of the silly heart.Opening my eyes i could see the crushed petals and i was in land unknown...but i still loved..if only and only just he could understand me....
18 comments:
Its really hard to leave someone without saying a formal goodbye but then its not easy to say farewell to someone u hv loved so much. Hard timess !!!
I cannot tell you how much this post touched my soul.. to the extent that I have a teardrop trickling down my face..
Words play with you..You play with love.. gosh! :|
This is so sad :( but nicely written :)
Touching !!
@Kiran Ashraf
It seems nothing comes without the hard times :P
And what you said i agree exactly to it.
@Confused Soul
Aw..! I hope it was not because you became sad when you read it.
Your last line is so bewildering at the same time encouraging!
Thank you!
@Purple mist
The sad part seems inevitable dear.Thank you.
@Green Speck
Thank you!
yes, silent goodbye actually hurt the most. its hard to decide if you are out of it or still a part of it. but then time does heal :)
sarah
so touching! Its takes a min to say Hello but a lifetime to say good-bye!
I am came towards ur blog... blog hopping... lived the way it is!!
ITs always painful say goodbye.. specially when you dont wish to leave but have no choice :(
The way you have described it crafted so well.. Each time I read you, you leave me admiring your writing even more!
its painful.... to love, to leave... it always hurts...
really touching dear... good work... keep going :) :)
yes!if only he did :/
:-) yep..n wen it doesnt heal u show on yourself
Very right.
Thank you for coming here.
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..
You can make your own choices you know.
Thank you so much for those words..means a lot..
Tc
Thank you...glad it could touch you!
tc
That is what it was all about...if only..
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