Pristine drops of hot liquid they fall,
smudged the corners of eyes go black,
the dark Kohl liquefying
as they trace down their path..
A gentle caress from behind,
Two eyes meet one is gloomy,
And one is streaked.
Gloomed with unending catastrophe.
Streaked with colors of happiness.
Disputatious the emotions mingle through.
Towers of anxiety cracks apart,
Reigns the serene ray of heart.
Clasping in warmth,
intermingling the clefts,
Splash of white fill the saturnine depths..
11 comments:
lovely...! came across your blog through indiblogger, where you have submitted for feedback.
love your blog, the poems, pics, music :))
Full of feelings of the moment :))
Beautiful. Very vivid. I love your use of imagery. Keep on writing. :)
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The image does justice to your work...and beautifully so...the emotions are well conveyed as is the gentle transition from shedding a lonely tear to finding respite in the arms of someone!
liked it! tc! :)
Glad that you liked it Sneha.. Thank you :)
:) P-Kay..
Would you please elaborate on the moments?
Thank you Sohni..
Keep chiming in and i shall keep on writing :)..
Thank you Maverick..You always get the right excerpt of the total composition..
:) keep smiling always..!!
Alcina :) Is there anything to elaborate ? Its just a word. That you beautifully described :)
I wanted to know about the feelings of the moment :)
Thank you..for beholding the beauty :)
:))
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