"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Clasp..

Pristine drops of hot liquid they fall,
smudged the corners of eyes go black,
the dark Kohl liquefying 
as they trace down their path..
A gentle caress from behind,
Two eyes meet one is gloomy, 
And one is streaked.
Gloomed with unending catastrophe.
Streaked with colors of happiness.
Disputatious the emotions mingle through.
Towers of anxiety cracks apart,
Reigns the serene ray of heart.
Clasping in warmth,
intermingling the clefts,
Splash of white fill the saturnine depths..

11 comments:

SEPO said...

lovely...! came across your blog through indiblogger, where you have submitted for feedback.

love your blog, the poems, pics, music :))

P-Kay said...

Full of feelings of the moment :))

Sohni Chakrabarti said...

Beautiful. Very vivid. I love your use of imagery. Keep on writing. :)


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Maverick said...

The image does justice to your work...and beautifully so...the emotions are well conveyed as is the gentle transition from shedding a lonely tear to finding respite in the arms of someone!

liked it! tc! :)

Alcina said...

Glad that you liked it Sneha.. Thank you :)

Alcina said...

:) P-Kay..

Would you please elaborate on the moments?

Alcina said...

Thank you Sohni..
Keep chiming in and i shall keep on writing :)..

Alcina said...

Thank you Maverick..You always get the right excerpt of the total composition..
:) keep smiling always..!!

P-Kay said...

Alcina :) Is there anything to elaborate ? Its just a word. That you beautifully described :)

Alcina said...

I wanted to know about the feelings of the moment :)

Thank you..for beholding the beauty :)

P-Kay said...

:))