Enlightening hues putting in a fire,
My heart and soul are on top of desires.
Captivating glance of your mesmerizing eyes.
The cool breeze attitude bearing you thrive.
You come across my eyes i see you.
The enrapturing aura that you possess,
Divulges infinite numbers of spells,
dissipating in every direction they fly.
Some go close,some choose to remain far behind.
Enkindling a tear in some thoughtful eyes.
Together with enunciating rules for thy.
You become logan;
or melting through the crevices
like drops of falling quicksilver liquid.
You gulp down the universe
as well as create a huge cosmos,
galore of deeds perform throughout.
Like nova you act at extremes all time.
Winkle out eukephalin or
make the surround gay as you go about.
Passion-fruit sometimes
or become the none.
Its all your power you keep
on experimenting ever after.
Don't give a damn if
others react or remain to shun.
11 comments:
"Its all your power you keep
on experimenting everafter.
Don't give a damn if
others react or remain to shun."
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"Enlightening hues putting in a fire,
My heart and soul are on top of desires.
Captivating glance of your mesmerizing eyes."
These two stanzas are just Superb:)
:) ..
Thank you P-Kay
Amazing piece of work. my eyes drift through very easy.
You had the style, and its good.
Love it.
Best wishes.
so wonderfully written, luv it!
there is a musical quality to your piece, takes me to another place. I love it.
I love the images that you have created with words here.
Interesting poem, though I do not understand all of the words. I particularly liked the lines about the "infinite numbers of spells / dissipating in every direction they fly." Powerful imagery here!
I like the inner conflict this secretly reflects.
I love the subtle, alchemical imagery scattered throughout this piece! :o)
it's all almost too much.. I think I need to sit down and have a cup of tea.. really your energy is apparent.. a loose gun of a poet.. :)
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