Gripping my soul in your hand..You are the one who is ruling me..!
"Its all your power you keepon experimenting everafter.Don't give a damn ifothers react or remain to shun."AND"Enlightening hues putting in a fire,My heart and soul are on top of desires.Captivating glance of your mesmerizing eyes."These two stanzas are just Superb:)
:) ..Thank you P-Kay
Amazing piece of work. my eyes drift through very easy.
You had the style, and its good.Love it.Best wishes.
so wonderfully written, luv it!
there is a musical quality to your piece, takes me to another place. I love it.
I love the images that you have created with words here.
Interesting poem, though I do not understand all of the words. I particularly liked the lines about the "infinite numbers of spells / dissipating in every direction they fly." Powerful imagery here!
I like the inner conflict this secretly reflects.
I love the subtle, alchemical imagery scattered throughout this piece! :o)
it's all almost too much.. I think I need to sit down and have a cup of tea.. really your energy is apparent.. a loose gun of a poet.. :)
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