Gripping my soul in your hand..You are the one who is ruling me..!
Bhuj gaya jo diya jal utha fir dil seJab ek aansu ke boond nikal gayi thi nigaon seAsha ki kiran ne mehakadiya saare shaam fir seEk aur sunhari savere ki khush bhari aas ne :)))))(This is positive :))) Aap ke bhuja hua chirag ko mei ne jala diya, without your permission. :)))
So nice of you.. :)The composition equals the nicesity :D ..Why don't you post it as one of your poem Saying jal utha fir woh chirag.. wat say?
Tnx :) But it will be a torture to the readers ha ha ha ha ha. I am not good at poems :)) Just worked on your theme :))
Well I think the same while writing any story..But as said earlier criticism and appreciation should be welcomed equally..So there wont be any harm if your try..Now wat do u say?
Agreed :)) Will try for a better one "Kabhi na kabhi " :)))) Tnx for the encouragement.
:)..Your welcome..And yeah "kabhi na kabhi"also seems a good topic.. ;)
ha ha ha ha ha.
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