Each pore of cut that was made,
with the blade digging deep.
Each crimson drop that fell.
Like the falling grains of time.
Watching the infinity in front of eyes,
it seem to be never ending.
But it had a point;
from where he may start a fresh.
Lonesome soul possessor,
body without a heart inside,
mind that was clogged and plagued.
Touch that was not able to reach any human.
Ghastly silence that got created,
everywhere it roamed in infinity.
The cold wind that were blowing through the hole.
Burning the desires high and ferocious.
Meanings of words lost in the air.
Feel vanished in an instant.
Deciphering the codes was impossible.
Eyes that were not shutting at all,
heavy and in need of something.
The poison that ran through the flesh,
bitten he was by insomnia.
19 comments:
well written...
Hey, Hi
never did the word insomnia seem so dark as your words make it...that was a real nice piece...beautiful.
Regards,
The Silhouette...
beautifully worded. I can relate to this.
<3
aah insomnia, I wonder do they really sleep. The hole? are we imagining things, that are not real, or does insomnia bring about a new reality, when a part of our brain sleeps, and another unexplored part away from normal conscience awakes.
Nice lines.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Very beautifully you explained about an accompanied and depressed soul in search of peace and relief.
You have a beautiful way of expressing the things so clearly..
All over a very touching post full of unusual feelings.
Keep Expressing Dear
Take care :)
Painful poetry... Brilliant work!
Explained the feelings behind Insomnia very well...Very beautifully written..:]
Happy Blogging!
too deep a description...could feel the pain....nice piece of poetry :)
superbly written dear !! i love the way u express ur feeling !! nice blog and thanks for visiting my blog keep regular come !!
@Hemu di thank you :)
@Eon
My blog has mostly this shade..you have more to discover the darker side :)
Thank you so much
@rivercat
I am glad you can relate dear..
thanx :)
@Blasphemous Aesthete
It is as you see it :) ..
Thank you!
@Simo
Thanx darling..my pleasure that you could have it as simple :)
@Deepika
Thanks dear..the pain is the most pleasurable when exceeds the so called limit :)
Hope you had a happy visit here!
keep chiming!
@Valli
Thank you
Keep chiming! :D
@Saumya
Deep..hmm..you felt it really well then :)
Thank you :)
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!
@Vish
Thanks a lot..
I would try my best and as soon i can :)
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!
the way you have explained is awesome. :)
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