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Friday, April 29, 2011

Strucked!




I looked at the black clouds that were covering the sky,

slowly they swept away in silence.
It was evening time, yet it appeared to be so dark.
I embraced myself tight so that i don't lose me.

So wrong i was at that moment, 
I was not of mine but for someone. 
i should have known,
the reality of being born..

They say pairs are made in heaven,
as if they know that one exists even.
Heavenly semblance is a mirage to the eyes,
when do we open up before too late.

Imperfect two parts join together,
making one perfect soul to address.
As the clouds swept past the clouds,
making their way into the unending frame.

The moon appeared white and dull,
it talked of experience of so many years,
in the sky alone may be so i thought.
Stars were around but not a single close.
Glistening and sparkling a star switched it's position.
The strong affinity that the moon's feel had.
It was just for sometime she came close to him,
rest of the night he teased her.

I watched how he played so brilliantly day by day.
Alone it appeared but showing opposite feel.
It boasted to her of having so many stars around him,
though he knew that no one was that special.

The longing and yearn in her was unnoticed,
it became too late for him to realize and submit.
She glowed very bright that day in sky,
met him very happy with delight.

Who knew it was her last day with him.
He was to be left alone forever.
Like evanescence she vanished that day.
Night was the only one to witness their story.

But no one knew that i too watched,
that love that had blossomed and ended so hard.
But i thought it was not the reality end,
Yes! the love i say.. was falling eternal and all the more..


-Alcina

22 comments:

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

The star just fell off the frame, complying to someone else's wish. The stars you talk as desolate and alone, well, the pairs are there and they eventually mate into one. But that does not matter to them if someone watches it or not, the moon is too close to us and has its back on them.

No wonder, moon also feels lonely sometimes.


Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Raghu said...

beautiful..

the other side of me said...

Imperfect two parts join together,
making one perfect soul to address...
well..ur words are just perfect..

Vivek said...

Hi,

You has beautifully , put accross the instances of dark cloud the state of distress , moon lonely heart but still smiling, stars far yet gives the inspiration to don't loose the focus in life.

Loved the way created the imaginary all together with a thought of real life embedded within.

Thanks for sharing.

Take care.
Happy weekend.

विवेक Call me Vish !! said...

very nice specially.....Who knew it was her last day with him.
He was to be left alone forever.
Like evanescence she vanished that day.
Night was the only one to witness their story.
.....................you such a wonderful story teller through ur writting !!

GOooodD work !!

Jai HO Mangalmay HO

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi

the night and its stories....there is always a one untold...
:)

beautiful...


Regards,
The Silhouette...

Matangi Mawley said...

Beautiful!!

vaisakhi said...

beautifully written...deep n touchin...lovely post...:)

Hema Nimbekar said...

deep and touching lines...

"Imperfect two parts join together,
making one perfect soul to address."

"Who knew it was her last day with him."


"But no one knew that i too watched,
that love that had blossomed and ended so hard."

loved these lines...keep writing...

Valli said...

Nicely penned..:)
Happy Blogging

Beyond Horizon said...

:) Nothing to say more...

I already told you,even I love the way it is!

Hope that someone to correct it comes soon :)

Alcina said...

@Blasphemous Aesthete
Yes it does.. :)

Alcina said...

@Raghu
Thank you!

Alcina said...

@the other side of me aka Blood Is Red
Honored by those words and never thought someone would look it this way :)

All smiling...

Keep smiling
tc

Alcina said...

@Vivek
You told me so nicely that what you got from it for that thank you to you firstly
and then thank you so much for the appreciation..

Alcina said...

@Vish
Thanx a lot..will jump on your asap...

Alcina said...

@Eon Heath
So that generations to come may end up finding one or the other secrets for the time further..
thank you

Alcina said...

@Matangi Mawaley
Thank you..

Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@vaisakhi
Thank you dear :)

Alcina said...

@Hemu di
thank you..yes will surely do that..

Alcina said...

@Valli
Thank you
same to you!

Alcina said...

@Beyond Horizon
Fingers crossed :) ..Thank you..