"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Sunday, June 19, 2011

Absorbed!

The gleaming shine of the sun were dampened.
The white light converted into hue.
Dazed by the realistic proceedings.
The touch of love and throbbing heart,
care and concern both left me in trance.
Spilling rays of purity all throughout.
Smothering me but felt so warm.
It didn't break or shatter at all,
it just weaved the broken connections.
The subtle moments and short lingers,
the trickle of joy and the mingling pain.
I never could imagine a day as such,
hope to carry the essence till last breathe.
Dive in the memories like never before,
submerged and fulfilled,
till splurged up in divine moonlight.
And the night grows spouts,
which caress in disguise.

5 comments:

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi
a night so lovely is sure to last a lifetime in the memories...
:)
beautiful...


Regards,
The Silhouette..

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Seems like the author had a near life experience :P
Some moments stay with us throughout our lives, cherished forever, and beacons in rough times.

Nice one,

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

the other side of me said...

Hey babe

Nicely written,

Love you

Raj said...

care and concern both left me in trance. the poem was good if not great but this line i didn't like. i mean fine i get what you mean but when you are talking about love i dont know if its just me but, care and concern? try yearning and bereavement. now that can leave one in a trance.

and girl. angel? LOL.

Valli said...

Loved the last two lines a lot...

Beautiful :)