"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Wednesday, June 15, 2011

She was within him!

This entry is submitted by me for Thursday Poets Rally Week 46!

Entropic the heartbeat conveyed a little less.
The eyes closed in a haze. 
Advancement towards the future seemed crashing,
hallucinating light of knowledge dwindling.
With the playing liquid in hand,
 the voice hummed a tone.
Pulling her hands; 
he laid themselves in moonlight. 
Twisting her hairs around his fingers,
he softly placed kiss on her cheeks.
She nudged him a little, 
shoved him aside.
But couldn't keep her love from him.
Removing the glass from his hand,
wiping away his tears,
she embraced him in her clasp.
And the night was a pleasure.
The beats fell right in place,
eyes closed with dreams innate.
The future seemed full of bliss,
so delighted he was as she gleaned him.

unexpected drop
rally praises poets dream
acceptance in pride 

I nominate Lonely recluse :


Paul said...

I really like this, the flow and sensuality of it is appealing, thank you

thingy said...

Sexy, erotic, lovely. : )

genebrother said...

Anticipation with Expectations

I enjoyed reading.


Tino said...


The ending is marvellous, filled with hope, tinged with fear.

catieeliza said...

enjoyed the story of it. :] xx

Prateek said...

Ah! Love! A purely divine abstract and you portrait it so well, Alcina.

Jingle said...

the action words in detail make your poem very real, visual, and heart warming.

well done.

Tarang Sinha said...

Full of love, care and emotions. Nice piece of writing.

tarunima said...

feelings of longing,love well conveyed!
lovely write:)

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi
Woh shaam bhi kya shaam hogi..

Eon Heath

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

And love moves through my days, in mysterious ways. :D

The see sawing between a dark and a love post, I might say I kind of miss that. But now the hues are a lovelier mellow. :)

Blasphemous Aesthete

lonelyrecluse said...

A beautiful poem Alcina. Loved how the words lay on the page, it's actually given me some inspiration fo an experiment at a poem, so thank you for that. A beautiful representation of the topic, loved the lines
"But couldn't keep her love from him.
Removing the glass from his hand,
wiping away his tears,
she embraced him in her clasp"
The Lonely Recluse.

Blaga said...

Love feelings, always nice to read about love!

mindlovemisery said...

I was taken with the first line its beautiful. I agree with what's been said the sensuality, the romantic feel the poem has such an enveloping aura

Red Handed said...

The happily ever after ending...

I love your beautifully crafted lines!


nice writting... keep on writing...

magdalenahermanstories said...

Very sensual. Also, you've captured the forgetful embrace of the moment by the lovers perfectly. Good job! :D

Andy McDonald said...

Loving the constant contrast of light and dark, love and fear. Well penned.

shoelessboywonder said...

Lets see, subject matter was clear, and easliy understood without losing its creativity, over all strong didn't weaken at one point. Good job Pleasure to meet you and thanks for swinging by my blog.

No feeling is without cause,


the other side of me said...

Hey darling

Beatifully written..love it
Its romantic too ;)

Someone is Special said...

too romantic.. here is my cute tune on nature

Someone is Special

bendedspoon said...

and I remember the cautious yet excited beating of my heart. wonderful write :)

blackswanpoetry said...

very beautiful..

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

This piece flows beautifully. Well done.

alivealways said...

was he crying, that's quite an imagination.
Nice girl with the cat, I like the attitude :-)

periwinkler said...

Nice work alcina!!!