A click of heartbeats together.
Intertwined fingers of his and her.
Dripping lusty desires of him.
Thirst of love gripping her soul every inch.
A moment so close,
teasing one another.
She whispers soft in his ears.
Beats gone out of rhythm.
Tears brimming up the heart.
Withdrawing the hold she leaves,
bidding him forever an adieu..
43 comments:
Thirst of love! I loved how that sounded.
This was gooood. Way good. My type, dark, sinister and still beautiful. ;)
AMAAAAAZING!!!:-)
There are a few painful adios in life which lasts forever in mind.
Nice words.
Take care !!
Very nice indeed.. its a story said in few words, in a poetic way.. and the pic u chose just complemented it brilliantly!
Beats gone out of rhythm. nice....
bidding adieu is the hardest part.. yet you crafted it beautifully ..
Weakest LINK
very nice!!!!!
elegant imagery, wow, I am listening your music here,
smiles.
Happy Rally.
The visual was very effective. The emotion matches it!! Nice job.
William
A wonderful and well written post. Love the pic. Nice touch.
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COOL ENTRY.
What a lovely poem, and such a sad goodbye!
Still after all these years - I can recall the pain of a couple of adieu(s) ... strange how that can occur.
Thirst of Love
Beats gone out of rhythm
are great visuals ... along with the chosen image.
Great write!
Still after all these years - I can recall the pain of a couple of adieu(s) ... strange how that can occur.
Thirst of Love
Beats gone out of rhythm
are great visuals ... along with the chosen image.
Great write!
Love...nicely told. Evoking.
Tres bien! Merci.
ZQ
"Dripping lusty desires of him.
Thirst of love gripping her soul every inch." Lovely lines.
Always painful yet sometimes life gives us with no choices but to say adieu..Nicely written gurl !
As far as I remember this is the first time you have written about Good bye.
its very difficult to say, but sometimes we ought to :)
Goodbyes are always sad.
goodbyes are sad, but this poem makes it remarkable.
welcome sharing a piece of your talent with us today.
best.
random poems are welcome.
@Crystal
Thanks :) ..its all how you watch girl!
@Rahul
Thankkk youuuuu :P
@Reicha Ahluwalia
Yes reicha..truly..Thank you!
@KP
Thank you.. :) ..I liked the image too and didn't know if it would go well with this or not..thank you for confirming the fact.
@blackswanpoetry
Thank you!
@Rachit
As they say beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder :)
Thank you
And hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..
@herenownotforeva
Thank you
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..
@The Orange Tree
Thank you so much..*smiles back*
@William Leed
Thank you.
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..
@Marbles in My Pocket
Thank you so much..
@The Noiseless Cuckooclock
Really? i never thought it could be so :P
Thanks
@Ina
Some good byes are to come back as soon as possible.. :)
Thank you
@beccagivens
Remembering them is ok but being sad about them is not..C'mon cheer up :)
Thanks a ton!
@insanebloom
I believe it invoked something in you too.. :)
Thank you
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..
@ZQ
I specially got on Google to decipher your comment :P
Thank you so much!
@Kay
Thank you :)
@Lilangel
Yep..life gives us no other choice :)
Thank you angel :)
@Beyond Horizon
Yep!
It is difficult to say good bye and i have written something about it once before also but not titled something like that.
Thank you so much for the visit dear!
@shail
As i told someone in previous comment..giving them and remembering them is hard but not sad cause you know you can be back or this may hold something good in future.
@The Gooseberry Garden
Thank you so much..I'll try and join for sure :)
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..
wonderful...been away for quite some time...happy to c dat the intensity lives and has amplified in your work...liked it! tc! :)
Love the way you've written this
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