"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Saturday, October 29, 2011

Adieu!


A click of heartbeats together.
Intertwined fingers of his and her.
Dripping lusty desires of him.
Thirst of love gripping her soul every inch.
A moment so close, 
teasing one another.
She whispers soft in his ears.
Beats gone out of rhythm.
Tears brimming up the heart. 
Withdrawing the hold she leaves,
bidding him forever an adieu.. 


43 comments:

Cяystal said...

Thirst of love! I loved how that sounded.
This was gooood. Way good. My type, dark, sinister and still beautiful. ;)

Rahul said...

AMAAAAAZING!!!:-)

Reicha Ahluwalia said...

There are a few painful adios in life which lasts forever in mind.

Nice words.

Take care !!

KP said...

Very nice indeed.. its a story said in few words, in a poetic way.. and the pic u chose just complemented it brilliantly!

blackswanpoetry said...

Beats gone out of rhythm. nice....

Rachit said...

bidding adieu is the hardest part.. yet you crafted it beautifully ..

Weakest LINK

herenownotforeva said...

very nice!!!!!

The Orange Tree said...

elegant imagery, wow, I am listening your music here,
smiles.

Happy Rally.

William Leed said...

The visual was very effective. The emotion matches it!! Nice job.
William

Marbles in My Pocket said...

A wonderful and well written post. Love the pic. Nice touch.

http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/02/mom-was-always-there-2/

The Noiseless Cuckooclock said...

COOL ENTRY.

Ina said...

What a lovely poem, and such a sad goodbye!

beccagivens said...

Still after all these years - I can recall the pain of a couple of adieu(s) ... strange how that can occur.

Thirst of Love
Beats gone out of rhythm

are great visuals ... along with the chosen image.

Great write!

beccagivens said...

Still after all these years - I can recall the pain of a couple of adieu(s) ... strange how that can occur.

Thirst of Love
Beats gone out of rhythm

are great visuals ... along with the chosen image.

Great write!

insanebloom said...

Love...nicely told. Evoking.

Anonymous said...

Tres bien! Merci.
ZQ

Kay said...

"Dripping lusty desires of him.
Thirst of love gripping her soul every inch." Lovely lines.

Lilangel said...

Always painful yet sometimes life gives us with no choices but to say adieu..Nicely written gurl !

Beyond Horizon said...

As far as I remember this is the first time you have written about Good bye.

its very difficult to say, but sometimes we ought to :)

shail said...

Goodbyes are always sad.

The Gooseberry Garden said...

goodbyes are sad, but this poem makes it remarkable.

welcome sharing a piece of your talent with us today.

best.

random poems are welcome.

Alcina said...

@Crystal
Thanks :) ..its all how you watch girl!

Alcina said...

@Rahul
Thankkk youuuuu :P

Alcina said...

@Reicha Ahluwalia
Yes reicha..truly..Thank you!

Alcina said...

@KP
Thank you.. :) ..I liked the image too and didn't know if it would go well with this or not..thank you for confirming the fact.

Alcina said...

@blackswanpoetry
Thank you!

Alcina said...

@Rachit
As they say beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder :)
Thank you
And hope you had a happy visit here!!

Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@herenownotforeva
Thank you

Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@The Orange Tree
Thank you so much..*smiles back*

Alcina said...

@William Leed
Thank you.
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@Marbles in My Pocket
Thank you so much..

Alcina said...

@The Noiseless Cuckooclock
Really? i never thought it could be so :P
Thanks

Alcina said...

@Ina
Some good byes are to come back as soon as possible.. :)
Thank you

Alcina said...

@beccagivens
Remembering them is ok but being sad about them is not..C'mon cheer up :)

Thanks a ton!

Alcina said...

@insanebloom
I believe it invoked something in you too.. :)
Thank you
Hope you had a happy visit here!!
Keep chiming..

Alcina said...

@ZQ
I specially got on Google to decipher your comment :P

Thank you so much!

Alcina said...

@Kay
Thank you :)

Alcina said...

@Lilangel
Yep..life gives us no other choice :)

Thank you angel :)

Alcina said...

@Beyond Horizon
Yep!
It is difficult to say good bye and i have written something about it once before also but not titled something like that.
Thank you so much for the visit dear!

Alcina said...

@shail
As i told someone in previous comment..giving them and remembering them is hard but not sad cause you know you can be back or this may hold something good in future.

Alcina said...

@The Gooseberry Garden
Thank you so much..I'll try and join for sure :)

Hope you had a happy visit here!!

Keep chiming..

Maverick said...

wonderful...been away for quite some time...happy to c dat the intensity lives and has amplified in your work...liked it! tc! :)

disjointedrhymings.com said...

Love the way you've written this