"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Tuesday, December 21, 2010

कोहरा ..

महकी ज़मी थी 
सांसे हवाओ में घुली थी
एहसास उनका था हर पल में
रौशनी हलकी सी थी अँधेरे में|

ठहर गया था वह वक़्त इज़हारे मोहब्बत में
हमारे इकरार में आखिर हो चले 
बेखबर दीवाने से वो ||

उजला सम्हा था सुबह के कोहरे में
कह्कशाएं दिख रही थी 
उस  नरम रात के धुएं में||| 

7 comments:

P-Kay said...

Good words....but feeling incomplete. Hope more words will follow later to complete it.:)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

अपने चाहने वाले को इतना तरसाना ठीक नहीं,
इकरार के इंतज़ार में कितने दीवाने दिलजले हो बैठे हैं...

Nice lines, love, mist, lover, and beauty... everything is in here.
Liked it.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

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Beyond Horizon said...

Another beautiful creation in hindi...

Alcina said...

@P-Kay

Yeah..but later on..till now let it be like this.

Alcina said...

@ Blasphemous Aesthete

जी ज़रूर :)

Thanks for the like :D

Alcina said...

@Beyond horizon

So modest of you :)