Crossing and weaving with each moment.
Slowly reaching to it's destination.
Each day it feels it is getting near,
to the finish line which is visible from here.
Not a day passes without the sudden rush;
rush of variant splurges of complexing emotions.
Sometimes a long lingering smile,
with a thought of someone in mind.
Sometimes a sad sigh,
just by waiting that seems prolonged.
Pouring of red liquid is still functioning out,
with the beats sounding clear,
in the echoing silence of surround.
Consuming toxicity of each falling hour,
impatience is now taking shape deep down.
When will it end?when will i go there?
Thrusting questions storming the mind.
Heavenly peace and utmost harmony,
experience of a sudden bliss through fury.
Stopping beats,liquid stands still,
clock ticks on and breathe is lost.
Now atlas journey ends.
Long coveted destination,
there you see she reaches heaven.
11 comments:
Sounding as in utmost pain...and the impatience is intolerable
Why?
choice of the two pics is perfect...
@Beyond horizon
It is meant to sound like it to you i guess :)
Thanks..i was in a fix as to what images would go with em'
close but never too far, such is heaven. You know, its just one blink away, yet it looks like at horizon, which is always elusive as the night approaches. Blink again, and its morning, in heaven.
So much pleasure, so much in pain?
so much at loss, so much to gain?
I'd bet it all.
Nice post, but the search has to end somewhere.
Oh and he doesn't mind being disturbed, once he is. :P
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
The endless wait....fr reaching a destination....where just the thought of reaching it spurs one one...keeps one going..
nd yet, the destination's identity remains vague, unclear...is it a place we intend to reach...is it a person we want to be with...is it the end that we crave for!!!
beautifully done! tc!
Heaven is not the destination, but just a step away for sure..and I see this one happy post :)
@Blasphemous Aesthete
In short contradiction filled life :)
I wish it never did :)
Oh thats great..
@Maverick
As always you beautifully describe the piece in two-three lines :)
Thank you for that :)
@Sourav
I have always loved the hell ;)
Heaven doesn't provide much of the needed..because they are said to be filled with fairies..and i love to hit the reality rather than fairy tale..
if i try to read it symbolically... well... a heaven once could be a hell later... and thats what always happens... we keep craving for something for really long.. and when we find it.. we feel... may be we didnt ask for this.. but something else...
quoting from a muvee - "hum apni manzil ko paane ke liye kya kuch nahi karte... aur sab paane ke bad humen aisa kyun lagta hai ki humne zindagi se ye to nahi manga tha......"
I hope i did put my point! :)
Cheers!
@Rup
Hmm...Yes i get you..
You know human is such a creature who's desires never ever can get fulfilled and the day that does happen they can have a peaceful sleep of lifetime>Death or if they die without the fulfillment then they become what we call ghosts :P(if that creature really exists)
yeah that's true... i posted on it once... "if life is a bitch we are the dogs.. its us who screw lives and not the other way round" :D :D :D
dont tell me u serious abt "becoming ghosts on death without fulfilment".. well... in that case.. there would be no peaceful soul :P :P
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