Lingering on for so long.
The touch almost dizzied me.
Enveloping my soul,
the breathe it was catching fast.
Your heartbeat sounded so magical.
The bitter-sweet taste of your tongues.
The smoking fragrance of you.
Insanity was in our talks all through out,
laughs and giggles were companions.
That ticklish touch and naughty glimpse.
That warm embrace made me feel so loved.
Holding hands was caring,
entwining each finger tight and secure.
Melodrama during the leaving of train.
I njoyed every bit with you.
The memories have frozen,
and will remain forever
of US beyond..
19 comments:
Hey, Hi
seems like you have captured a moment to last forever....
nicely done... :)
Regards,
The Silhouette...
cute write....memories freeze time...:)....lovely.....
Alcina.....you just nailed it !! superb post.....read my new post " Tera Eahsas" i hope it relates your post....
Jai Ho Mangalmay Ho
Almost perfect! :)
Why remember good days when you can always be with the loved one. Make a wish.
:)
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
@Eon
I wished for it to be so..
Thank you*
*conditions apply
@vaisakhi
yep..it does!
thank you
@Vish
That was a new and unique comment..Thanks a lot.
Yeah will read asap.
@Sourav
It is perfect for me.
Thanks for taking the pains of reading and commenting!
@Blasphemous Aesthete
How i wished it would had have been true for all..But people have to live in reality i suppose and it's not as we dream but as it wishes to be to us.
Made it..lets see if it gets true!
Hey
It's as amazing as always...
And as always i could picture those words in my mind...
Regards
BloodIsRed
You have hold those lovely memories forever within you...Beautiful!
:)
lovely post...nice poem...
Been a long time...and sorry I took so long to reply to ur comment...was away trying to search for some inspiration...
loved this one...its like that one perfect moment that etches itself on our minds...it becomes the spark that ignites nostalgia whenever it strikes...
Moments like these are what memories are made of...stay with us till we turn to dust! :)
tc!
@the other side of me aka Blood is red ;)
Glad you could picture them..thanks a lot..
@Beyond Horizon
Yes surely..and securely :)Thank you
@Hemu di
Thanks..
@Maverick
No problem and no need to be sorry :)
Till we turn to dust yes very true :)
Thank you!
Keep chiming in..
hey..its a smal poem.. with lot of meanin...... :)
liked it...............
i kno m late to comment on it.. :D
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