"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Thursday, April 28, 2011

Holding time..

Lingering on for so long.
The touch almost dizzied me.
Enveloping my soul, 
the breathe it was catching fast.
Your heartbeat sounded so magical.
The bitter-sweet taste of your tongues.
The smoking fragrance of you.
Insanity was in our talks all through out,
laughs and giggles were companions.
That ticklish touch and naughty glimpse.
That warm embrace made me feel so loved.
Holding hands was caring,
entwining each finger tight and secure.
Melodrama during the leaving of train.
I njoyed every bit with you.
The memories have frozen,
and will remain forever
of US beyond..


19 comments:

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi

seems like you have captured a moment to last forever....

nicely done... :)


Regards,
The Silhouette...

vaisakhi said...

cute write....memories freeze time...:)....lovely.....

विवेक Call me Vish !! said...

Alcina.....you just nailed it !! superb post.....read my new post " Tera Eahsas" i hope it relates your post....

Jai Ho Mangalmay Ho

Sourav said...

Almost perfect! :)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Why remember good days when you can always be with the loved one. Make a wish.
:)

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Alcina said...

@Eon
I wished for it to be so..
Thank you*

*conditions apply

Alcina said...

@vaisakhi
yep..it does!
thank you

Alcina said...

@Vish
That was a new and unique comment..Thanks a lot.
Yeah will read asap.

Alcina said...

@Sourav
It is perfect for me.

Thanks for taking the pains of reading and commenting!

Alcina said...

@Blasphemous Aesthete
How i wished it would had have been true for all..But people have to live in reality i suppose and it's not as we dream but as it wishes to be to us.

Made it..lets see if it gets true!

the other side of me said...

Hey
It's as amazing as always...
And as always i could picture those words in my mind...
Regards
BloodIsRed

Beyond Horizon said...

You have hold those lovely memories forever within you...Beautiful!
:)

Hema Nimbekar said...

lovely post...nice poem...

Maverick said...

Been a long time...and sorry I took so long to reply to ur comment...was away trying to search for some inspiration...

loved this one...its like that one perfect moment that etches itself on our minds...it becomes the spark that ignites nostalgia whenever it strikes...

Moments like these are what memories are made of...stay with us till we turn to dust! :)

tc!

Alcina said...

@the other side of me aka Blood is red ;)

Glad you could picture them..thanks a lot..

Alcina said...

@Beyond Horizon
Yes surely..and securely :)Thank you

Alcina said...

@Hemu di
Thanks..

Alcina said...

@Maverick
No problem and no need to be sorry :)

Till we turn to dust yes very true :)

Thank you!

Keep chiming in..

Anoop said...

hey..its a smal poem.. with lot of meanin...... :)

liked it...............

i kno m late to comment on it.. :D