It's written by me as a part of Mag60 (Magpie Tales)..
On a winter night,
I looked out of the window.
Blew some hot air on the glass.
With numb cold hands,
but heart filled with emotions,
i wrote over there : 'Love forever'..
Seasons gradually changed.
She loved me i knew so.
Today i talked with her for the first time.
She fought with me.
But i couldn't be away.
Even one moment from her.
After all i dreamed of her.
The bitter truth was harsh on me,
it was she didn't love me.
It ringed in my ears for so long.
So hard to believe and move on.
My heart squeezed,
it's beats lost somewhere.
It was a rainy day,
tears welled up my eyes.
I looked out of the window,
stared the glass.
Alas! the words were drenched in pain,
and wiped from there forever..
24 comments:
i wanted to ask u..
u write the poem first n then the title or title first n then poem??? :)
Love the last two lines :)
wow snehu...another good one..I like u represent emotions...
loved it..touchy...but loved it..
keep writing dear....:):)
how do u come up with such cute thoughts!
kudos!
It's a well constructed poem . . we all have this to go through from time to time. Good luck!
Ooo, lots of angst here. Well done.
Hey, Hi
a song says a story, and the way it did was beautiful...
but, why should there be pain if she didn love him? why do we anticipate love in return? why cant we jus giv love?
nice post...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
very touching...beautifully penned....My heart squeezed,
it's beats lost somewhere.
It was a rainy day,
tears welled up my eyes.....loved these lines the most...:)...
I write your name in my breath on the window
Sit and watch as it fades away
The painful memories
Of the tears of yesterday
~Hoobastank
Nice read Alcina. :)
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Very nice!
cute.
@Ninu
Now you have the answer ;)
@Blood Is Red
thank you :)
@Hemu di
Sure till you keep chiming in ;)
Thanks a lot..it means a lot :)
@Red Handed
Cute people as inspirations :)
Thanxx
@Trellissimo
Never judge a poet by his or her words is very rightly said..
Thank you!
Hope you had a happy visit!
Keep chiming!
@Tess Kincaid
Thanks a lot..it's the wonders done by your presented image alone :)
@ Eon Heath
It's the sole nature present in mortals :)
Thank you!
@vaisakhi
Glad you could like it..Thank you !
@Blasphemous Aesthete
Thanks for sharing the quote
Thank you!
@Tumblewords:
Thank you!
Hope you had a happy visit here!
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@Jingle
:)) Thanx!
Beautifully described.. Loved each & every bit of it..
@Raghu
Glad :)
Thank you
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