"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Wednesday, April 06, 2011

Wiped..

It's written by me as a part of Mag60 (Magpie Tales)..
On a winter night, 
I looked out of the window.
Blew some hot air on the glass.
With numb cold hands, 
but heart filled with emotions,
i wrote over there : 'Love forever'..
Seasons gradually changed.
She loved me i knew so. 
Today i talked with her for the first time.
She fought with me.
But i couldn't be away. 
Even one moment from her.
After all i dreamed of her.
The bitter truth was harsh on me,
it was she didn't love me.
It ringed in my ears for so long.
So hard to believe and move on.
My heart squeezed, 
it's beats lost somewhere.
It was a rainy day,
tears welled up my eyes.
I looked out of the window,
stared the glass.
Alas! the words were drenched in pain,
and wiped from there forever..

24 comments:

Ninu said...

i wanted to ask u..
u write the poem first n then the title or title first n then poem??? :)

Blood Is Red said...

Love the last two lines :)

Hema Nimbekar said...

wow snehu...another good one..I like u represent emotions...

loved it..touchy...but loved it..

keep writing dear....:):)

Red Handed said...

how do u come up with such cute thoughts!

kudos!

Trellissimo said...

It's a well constructed poem . . we all have this to go through from time to time. Good luck!

Tess Kincaid said...

Ooo, lots of angst here. Well done.

Eon Heath said...

Hey, Hi
a song says a story, and the way it did was beautiful...
but, why should there be pain if she didn love him? why do we anticipate love in return? why cant we jus giv love?
nice post...

Regards,
The Silhouette...

vaisakhi said...

very touching...beautifully penned....My heart squeezed,
it's beats lost somewhere.
It was a rainy day,
tears welled up my eyes.....loved these lines the most...:)...

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

I write your name in my breath on the window
Sit and watch as it fades away
The painful memories
Of the tears of yesterday

~Hoobastank


Nice read Alcina. :)

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Tumblewords: said...

Very nice!

Jingle said...

cute.

Alcina said...

@Ninu
Now you have the answer ;)

Alcina said...

@Blood Is Red
thank you :)

Alcina said...

@Hemu di
Sure till you keep chiming in ;)

Thanks a lot..it means a lot :)

Alcina said...

@Red Handed
Cute people as inspirations :)

Thanxx

Alcina said...

@Trellissimo
Never judge a poet by his or her words is very rightly said..

Thank you!
Hope you had a happy visit!
Keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@Tess Kincaid

Thanks a lot..it's the wonders done by your presented image alone :)

Alcina said...

@ Eon Heath
It's the sole nature present in mortals :)

Thank you!

Alcina said...

@vaisakhi
Glad you could like it..Thank you !

Alcina said...

@Blasphemous Aesthete
Thanks for sharing the quote
Thank you!

Alcina said...

@Tumblewords:
Thank you!
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@Jingle
:)) Thanx!

Raghu said...

Beautifully described.. Loved each & every bit of it..

Alcina said...

@Raghu
Glad :)
Thank you
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!