Remember the words we made together,
the tunes we heard together;
the way we felt each other;
The intense breathe collide.
The soft touch of lip on lip,
the play of tongues inside.
the casual relation that bloomed.
The way you called me sweetheart,
and i called you baby.
Our silence that spoke with each other,
never failing to talk even one day.
The anxious feeling when finding either of us sick.
Now i wait for us to be together again,
for our laughter to echo,
for each other to touch,
for the emollient caress,
for the lovely whispers,
for the unsaid wishes,
for the sparkling desires to ignite,
for the eye play,
and for you to say just a 'Yes i do' .....
23 comments:
Playing with words eh? Beautiful yet again my girl!!
Every post has so much love and want in it!!
Btw dint knw how to say thnku so mailed u.
omg omg omg... again love.... :)
niceeeeeeeeeee.... :D
Love , ah, so wonderous toghetherness can be even when alone thinkgin about the other :)
yes i do ,I do love you too!
<3
Crying With A Sense Of Human
Uff... the wait seems ever lasting and we just feel like turning back time to the moments when we and our beloved were close. No matter what the reasons for distance be, or wait, for that matter, but its too long a period.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Aaw, lovely and sad. A very nice write.
Wow... loved it!! keep writing, gal!
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RoHiT
dial-a-denial.blogspot.com
nicely penned..
awww....brimming with love :)
Its beautiful and the words used add to the beauty of the work :)
Keep Writing and sharing dear !
Take Care.
love the word flow.
invite you to share 1 to 3 poems to Jingle Poetry potluck now.
first time participants can use old poems or poems unrelated to the theme.
free style commenting,
hope to see you share.
xxx
So nicely written, very emotive, a good work!
@Red Handed
Thankuu
@Ninu
So it is!
@rivercat
Feels like you are saying to me :P
Thank you!
@Blasphemous Aesthete
Yep true..
Thank you!
@thingy
Thank you so much..
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!
@RoHiT Iyer
Thanks a ton..
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!
@Raghu
thanks
@Saumya
So you see..Thanks!
@Fatima
Thank you..
Sure!
@Jingle poetry
So you flowed..thanks
@eclipseofthemoon
Thank you..
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!
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