"The hardest of all is learning to be a well of affection,and not fountain,to show them that we love them,not when we feel like it,but when they do"

Friday, April 08, 2011

Wait..

Remember the words we made together,
the tunes we heard together;
the way we felt each other;
The intense breathe collide.
The soft touch of lip on lip,
the play of tongues inside.
the casual relation that bloomed.
The way you called me sweetheart,
and i called you baby.
Our silence that spoke with each other,
never failing to talk even one day.
The anxious feeling when finding either of us sick.
Now i wait for us to be together again,
for our laughter to echo,
for each other to touch,
for the emollient caress,
for the lovely whispers,
for the unsaid wishes,
for the sparkling desires to ignite,
for the eye play,
and for you to say just a 'Yes i do' .....

23 comments:

Red Handed said...

Playing with words eh? Beautiful yet again my girl!!

Every post has so much love and want in it!!
Btw dint knw how to say thnku so mailed u.

Ninu said...

omg omg omg... again love.... :)

niceeeeeeeeeee.... :D

rivercat said...

Love , ah, so wonderous toghetherness can be even when alone thinkgin about the other :)
yes i do ,I do love you too!
<3

Crying With A Sense Of Human

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Uff... the wait seems ever lasting and we just feel like turning back time to the moments when we and our beloved were close. No matter what the reasons for distance be, or wait, for that matter, but its too long a period.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

thingy said...

Aaw, lovely and sad. A very nice write.

RoHiT Iyer said...

Wow... loved it!! keep writing, gal!

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RoHiT
dial-a-denial.blogspot.com

Raghu said...

nicely penned..

Saumya said...

awww....brimming with love :)

Fatima said...

Its beautiful and the words used add to the beauty of the work :)

Keep Writing and sharing dear !

Take Care.

Jingle Poetry said...

love the word flow.

Jingle Poetry said...

invite you to share 1 to 3 poems to Jingle Poetry potluck now.

first time participants can use old poems or poems unrelated to the theme.

free style commenting,

hope to see you share.



xxx

eclipseofthemoon said...

So nicely written, very emotive, a good work!

Alcina said...

@Red Handed
Thankuu

Alcina said...

@Ninu
So it is!

Alcina said...

@rivercat
Feels like you are saying to me :P

Thank you!

Alcina said...

@Blasphemous Aesthete
Yep true..
Thank you!

Alcina said...

@thingy
Thank you so much..

Hope you had a happy visit here!

Keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@RoHiT Iyer
Thanks a ton..

Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!

Alcina said...

@Raghu
thanks

Alcina said...

@Saumya
So you see..Thanks!

Alcina said...

@Fatima
Thank you..
Sure!

Alcina said...

@Jingle poetry
So you flowed..thanks

Alcina said...

@eclipseofthemoon
Thank you..

Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming!