slowly they swept away in silence.
It was evening time, yet it appeared to be so dark.
I embraced myself tight so that i don't lose me.
So wrong i was at that moment,
I was not of mine but for someone.
i should have known,
the reality of being born..
They say pairs are made in heaven,
as if they know that one exists even.
Heavenly semblance is a mirage to the eyes,
when do we open up before too late.
Imperfect two parts join together,
making one perfect soul to address.
As the clouds swept past the clouds,
making their way into the unending frame.
The moon appeared white and dull,
it talked of experience of so many years,
in the sky alone may be so i thought.
Stars were around but not a single close.
Glistening and sparkling a star switched it's position.
The strong affinity that the moon's feel had.
It was just for sometime she came close to him,
rest of the night he teased her.
I watched how he played so brilliantly day by day.
Alone it appeared but showing opposite feel.
It boasted to her of having so many stars around him,
though he knew that no one was that special.
The longing and yearn in her was unnoticed,
it became too late for him to realize and submit.
She glowed very bright that day in sky,
met him very happy with delight.
Who knew it was her last day with him.
He was to be left alone forever.
Like evanescence she vanished that day.
Night was the only one to witness their story.
But no one knew that i too watched,
that love that had blossomed and ended so hard.
But i thought it was not the reality end,
Yes! the love i say.. was falling eternal and all the more..
-Alcina
21 comments:
The star just fell off the frame, complying to someone else's wish. The stars you talk as desolate and alone, well, the pairs are there and they eventually mate into one. But that does not matter to them if someone watches it or not, the moon is too close to us and has its back on them.
No wonder, moon also feels lonely sometimes.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
beautiful..
Imperfect two parts join together,
making one perfect soul to address...
well..ur words are just perfect..
Hi,
You has beautifully , put accross the instances of dark cloud the state of distress , moon lonely heart but still smiling, stars far yet gives the inspiration to don't loose the focus in life.
Loved the way created the imaginary all together with a thought of real life embedded within.
Thanks for sharing.
Take care.
Happy weekend.
very nice specially.....Who knew it was her last day with him.
He was to be left alone forever.
Like evanescence she vanished that day.
Night was the only one to witness their story.
.....................you such a wonderful story teller through ur writting !!
GOooodD work !!
Jai HO Mangalmay HO
Hey, Hi
the night and its stories....there is always a one untold...
:)
beautiful...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
beautifully written...deep n touchin...lovely post...:)
deep and touching lines...
"Imperfect two parts join together,
making one perfect soul to address."
"Who knew it was her last day with him."
"But no one knew that i too watched,
that love that had blossomed and ended so hard."
loved these lines...keep writing...
Nicely penned..:)
Happy Blogging
:) Nothing to say more...
I already told you,even I love the way it is!
Hope that someone to correct it comes soon :)
@Blasphemous Aesthete
Yes it does.. :)
@Raghu
Thank you!
@the other side of me aka Blood Is Red
Honored by those words and never thought someone would look it this way :)
All smiling...
Keep smiling
tc
@Vivek
You told me so nicely that what you got from it for that thank you to you firstly
and then thank you so much for the appreciation..
@Vish
Thanx a lot..will jump on your asap...
@Eon Heath
So that generations to come may end up finding one or the other secrets for the time further..
thank you
@Matangi Mawaley
Thank you..
Hope you had a happy visit here!
Keep chiming..
@vaisakhi
Thank you dear :)
@Hemu di
thank you..yes will surely do that..
@Valli
Thank you
same to you!
@Beyond Horizon
Fingers crossed :) ..Thank you..
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